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for Dark Knight

by xDAISUKIx

person moodysavage
schedule March 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was such a good chapter! Was Draco feeling Harry's emotions?
person pandagog
schedule March 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
you do know dumbledor is dead right and has no place starting a speech in the great hall at all
person XTakesheX
schedule March 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! This hasnt been updated regularly for a long time and perhqps you woukd do netter if you did. ANYWAY the romance seems to be going strong. Ohwait your going to go over the older chapters? Bummer
person Jan
schedule March 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Poor boys having to suffer through one of Dumbledores games, but I do love how everything is developing. Please update chapter 20 soon.
person SP777
schedule March 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #19..

I completely forgot about this story, got caught up going page by
page looking at the other stories in this section, until I came to page
one. Notice there are 69 pages. :-)

I loved the 'Red Lipstick' chapter...and I'm glad you made that comment on
reading the story & seeing what pace the story is at. Because a lot of authors
don't understand when readers start asking the question of 'well when is it going
to happen???', they just assume all readers are just impatient. No, you're [all authors that is] just
taking too much of your sweet time getting there, though there are impatient readers & yes there
needs to be a buildup in the story...before the ''coming'' together.

But, still...there has to be something else in the story to take our minds of the ''eventually''.

Despite all that, from my POV, I am more interested in the Sc
schedule March 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
awww! poor draco, but he came through the emergency like a trooper, and maybe has grown a little closer to the ever oblivious harry in the process. keep up the good work :)
schedule February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ch16-yeah, it left me confused in places too, one moment your talking about them being in DADA and then they're using cauldrons and potions?? maybe i just forgot something from earlier in the story since it's been a while since reading the earlier chapters. and i love making them have to actually -help- each other

ch-17 lol and they still haven't figured it out, well, they're too stubborn to anyway. hopefully the two will get their shit straight soon enough. i did like the informational card on draco though, hope he gets one harry too lol keep up the good work :)
person shay
schedule February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i just came across this fic a few hours ago and am in love with it. i can not wait for you to poast more of it. will be checking back regularly for updates. I CANT WAIT!!!!!
person Jan
schedule February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please update chapter 18 soon ^_^
person DB1
schedule February 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@17. Interesting pairing to come. Sad that Charlie didn't make the cut!!! Can't wait to see what's next. Update soon!!!

DB