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by xDAISUKIx

person APPLECHAN
schedule October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love this! looking forward to more!
schedule October 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Neville and Snape? ohhhhh... that would be good too :)
person KaylusCHU
schedule October 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
person CM
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah it's getting interesting! I want to know who all of Harry's mates are! I'm practically jumping in my seat. Can't wait for Harry to see Colin and Draco. Prat!Draco how can you get Harry with that attitude! Is severus going to be one of the mates? I love Dominant Harry! It makes me squee! Especially one with long legs! I prefer Dom Harry though it doesn't matter either way for me, it's just there's too many weak sub!Harry. Please Please update!
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
snickers... har's first official use for his powers was to find a bloody portkey. That's just classic... and hilarious.
I'm with nev on this one. Draco and his mob are just pitiful, trying desperately to cling to something that's long gone.
well, ouch, we knew his critter make over had altered har to all hell n gone but really, so much that his old school mates didn't recognise him? That hurts. at least nev would be familiar with critter inheritance coming forth.

So far in this, i'm liking draco for a sub mate. He really needs something to hold on to and i think har could give him that.
I agree with a previous reviewer in that in this story Blaise doesn't have much of a presence, so unless you built his personality up some, he'd just be another sub mate i think.
What really intrigued me was the idea of Moody as a mate and as a switch. I could honestly see that working, though it would be hella hard to write.
Snape has possibilities but he and draco are used far to often (though draco is practically begging for it in this)
people like Kingsley have potential or an oc, but kings is busy doing minister stuff and an Oc is whatever u make it.
Now that i think about it, there aren't really a lot of people to pick from, unless you're going to draft Vic or other Durmstrang lads. Dean and sean have made their opinion known. I think nev would probably be a restful mate to have. He's such a kind kid, though he has his own brand of strength and courage. he'd be like a detox mate.
the creevies... winces, a little two high strung and hero worshipy. Har really isn't comfortable with that.
pity Ced got dead, he would have been in the running, though i doubt his parents would have been very understanding.
The only un attached weasleys are charley and percy yeah? I've seen both of those done, (though percy usually needs a bit of a personality modification to make him bearable. >> ) I Draco/charlie mix could be fun. especially if you tossed in moody. that would be an absolute scream... though probably also a bitch to write. :P
So far i think i like the idea of a draco/charlie/moody mix or a draco/charlie/nev mix. the first has lots of strong personalities for potential clashing (which have charlie as the grounder since he's used to volatile beings. ^^) though if har was dom for this lot he'd have his work cut out for him. The second, i think charlie and nev would sort of bond to handle the volatile draco and i'm not sure if har would sub/dom or switch for that group. Probably dom though charlie would probably have to help guide is utterly inexperienced self along...
>> well anyway. there are some ideas you can play with. enjoy! ^^
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
GAH! how could i have forgetten the twins! *facepalm.
at any rate, i've seen both twins/har and twins/draco but the twins were dom role in both. i think the twins as switches in a har/twins/draco blend would be interesting too... i seem determined to make a super sub of draco don't i? >>
person jujukitty
schedule October 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yay for more! poor harry, life's always an adventure for him. looks like nev might be a little interested there too. keep up the good work :D
person jujukitty
schedule October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
another nice chapter, at least mione and ron know what's going on with him a little, though i'm curious as to why harry scratched them. keep up the good work :)
person gummibear
schedule October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice~ waiting for an update!

May I ask how many chapters you've already written? I'm looking forward to harry's time at Hogwarts!
schedule October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hmmm... opinions on Harry's spouses...

Definitely not Ron... he's too jealous. Someone who smells good to Harry... lol that will be fun. I would say Draco for sure. He's not always around Draco so catching his scent at different times and wondering who it is will be fun... and Draco looks like he would smell good :) He'd make a good submissive too.

I've always liked Harry with Snape too... but Snape has that whole godfather to Draco thing going on not to mention that he is seems like a dominant to me too.

Moody would be a good pick too. He seems more of a switch which would work well as a dominant to Draco but a submissive to Harry.

Please not Blaise though... he just doesn't stand out to me and I always find it hard to picture him as being a major player in any plotline.