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by xDAISUKIx

person XTakesheX
schedule October 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Whoa- i hadn't been keeping up with this and suddenly theres 2 more chapters! WEll, i was on vacation- but anyway, great chapters. Getting excited abut whats to come!
person 917brat
schedule October 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
forgot my password so....anyway I really like what you have happening so far and can wait for more so please keep it up and updat again soon. As fo voting can I still vote for Charlie weasely if you have him?
schedule October 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ehehehe- i can think of ALOT of nasty things Harry can do with his tail~ HWEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE!!!

Entertaining chapter! I'm curious too- Ryr sounds like he could be a major player.

So when can we vote? a scene where all candidates are seen... so like a Scath speedating?

Lol, cant wait for the next one- a week sounds way too long!
schedule October 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor tail just born and already got a scar, but then again the tail does belong to Harry so it should probably just be glad it was only a small wound.
person jujukitty
schedule October 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
another nice chapter, i'm curious how ryr is going to fit into things in the future and how harry's going to handle hiding his tail. can't wait to see how DADA goes as well. one little thing, harry's name -Carion- umm, you might want to rethink that name, carrion is what dead things are called (defined as "dead and putrefying flesh") and that's all i could think of when i read that name lol. otherwise, keep up the good work, can't wait to see more :)
schedule October 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
"I am of mind to make him Harry
schedule October 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice, looking forward to more story-

DominantXDominant? <3 Can't wait to see how they figure that out~

Sebastian (from what i've seen) seems to be be well constructed, rather than babbling on about how Harry (who isn't as sharp as hermione) noticed that the professors hair shone like the moon or his face was like an roman emperor and whatnot.

Update!!
person XTakesheX
schedule October 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I agree with the previous reviewer! Colin is adorable, fluffy andandandandand JUST TOO CUTE!! Cmon Harry, chomp him! XD
schedule October 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hey, ask and you shall receive. you asked for thoughts and ideas, so u gottem. :P
well, burn, no one but his closest recognized har? and they're all so nosy to boot.
So, what is the new defense teacher and why did he keep those two from going after har?
creevey as cute... shudders.
draco's a dom? Oh, this WILL be fun. mwhahahahaha.
What brought on har's critter tanty? Will there be more in the future? Also, will that scratch he placed on ron and mio have an influence on things?
person jujukitty
schedule October 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i liked the chapter, i thought it came out pretty well. i liked everybody's reactions to harry (well draco and colin anyway lol). and colin was just so... well basically, he's like prey, a little white fluffy bunny and harry's definitely the wolf ready to devour him lmfao. i could see him as a mate, but at the same time eh lol. keep up the good work, can't wait for more :)