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for The Heart of the Matter

by Jad

schedule September 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
lol im surprised that after everything that has already happened Snape hasn't just said "fuck it, I'm done with this shit". Can't imagine how stressed out these kids are making him and its gonna suck when Ginny(who I happen to adore and am glad you have not made into some turbo bitch like other authors have a habit of doing for the sake of their yaoi coupling) finds out about harry and Theodore..........unless you have some perverse 'menage a trois' planned out lol. Love the story, keep up the good work.
schedule September 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was stupid of them. Excellent updates!
schedule September 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have read this same story before, but I think it was under a different name. Good story though.
schedule September 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is really good.
person Quinn
schedule September 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I do find it a great fiction

And I am honest
It has a lot to do with the fact your Dumbeldore is like the book and my imagination shows him. And not the lying evil leech chess player, he is so often made to see like.

Your Draco is acure, if i can say that, as are Harry, Snape and the others

good

Quinn
person tiggator
schedule September 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, and you're leaving it THERE?! Love love LOVING this story. Your descriptions and writing of Draco's character is great. No, not just Draco's, but the others as well. You have me hating the Weasley children and actually believing that could be said by them. I don't find it out of character or anything. I want to punch them in the face every time they say something so horrible. They're in a war! Ugh, but when Draco defends Snape about being a human being?! Right you are Draco! *sigh* Sorry... your story just puts me right into these scenes which I absolutely love. I even teared up at parts. I cannot wait for more. Truly.
schedule September 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good grief! Poor Theo, so did his father mess up is that why he was attacked? Great chapter and will add an element of more slytherin's to the mix, great idea. Can't wait for more.
schedule September 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love it when you make a very mean Draco and a good one on Ginny, never could stand her even in the books. Thank you for a great chapter...your muse certainly rocks.
schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love a Draco who doesn't take any Sh!$...I get so tired of reading a Draco who doesn't get to act like how he truly is and I have to admit I love it when he takes it to the Weasle's chick. I have never liked her or the family. Thank you for a great read.
schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! That was so cool and I can't wait for Draco to lay into everyone again. Brilliant as usual.