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for In Loco Parentis

by Phoenixstrike

person Zakaira
schedule October 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was very fun to read! The dialog between Harry and Draco was my favorite and I think you could have fit in another awesome chapter, if you turned more of the story into great dialog like that. Personally, I'm hoping for some more Scorpius/Harry/Draco family bonding scenes next :)
schedule October 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i hope draco can be patient while scorpi gets used to him.
wow, it was really REALLY stupid of them to leave draco alive.
That's like burying the evidence in a really easy to find spot and now that King's knows about it, yeah, there's going to be trouble. they'd have hells own time getting to draco and scorpi now. Har is already extremely protective.
i'm with draco. i don't think har is asexual, he just hasn't met the right person yet. I think draco will be only to happy to help with that.

hmmm, well, i can understand har's reservations, but theres no need to rush the relationship. they can take it slow if they need to... or not. :P what made draco decide har was bottoming?

well, that last line is downright foreboding.
person Zakaira
schedule October 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
person eyrna1109
schedule October 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nooo.its.a.cliffhanger
schedule October 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! About time they got together and little Scorp is so cute. Great chapter and I look for more.
person remey
schedule October 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please add more
schedule October 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
lol you go Draco!
person alexkdp
schedule October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
he's gonna go to draco's room after this!!! ohmyay! haha. thanks for the great read. good chappie. i liked how there was sadness and then compassion, understanding and then full on passion. see ya next time :)
schedule October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, they are so cute together. I really love this story and can't wait for more.
schedule October 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well, hell, sucks to be draco and how, hard core. did they heal him up after each session or couple of sessions or stick to spells that wouldn;t do him to much in the way of physical damage?
Still, leaving him alive and with his will was a mistake that's gonna cost them... and draco is going to need soooooo much therapy and support to get through this. Still, i'm glad draco found his will. Now he has some rather nifty non verbal and wandless skills should he need them. Kind of reminds me a bit of Siri's stich... but without the dementors and siri didn't really have a reason to exert himself before he recognized wormtail. Draco literally had nothing left to lose.