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for Leopardspaw

by Lomonaaeren

person js
schedule November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's so nice to read about Harry's attraction to and pursuit of Draco. It's different from other stories that I've been reading lately.
person nightlo
schedule November 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
...actually apart from helping Lucius, does Draco have other motives to catch Lucius as soon as possible?
schedule October 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
No in depth review as usual, just a stop by to say I like it, and enjy reading it :)

Thanks xD

Sei xx
schedule October 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad malfoy got over that... it'll make things much more fun. i like your kings. even in your most pathetic incarnations of him, he's not very fawn and flatter...or at least not overtly.
and her we have our first hint of the real plot?

poor luc, not the end i'd wish for that. sounds like its gonna get all serious from here.
person SParker
schedule October 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #10...

Maaan, forget Team Edward & Team what's-his-face, GO
TEAM HARRY! Slogan: A Harry Potter with Attitude and
Sarcastic Wit...and the ability to think on his feet.

I like a Harry who is confident and not presented as this
'stuttering young man' who intends to remain eternally clueless
in the choices he makes, as some folks write him still.

Quick on his feet AND cocky, I would think at this point in his
life, especially as an Auror, you'd be reading about a self-assured
young man, who does know what he is doing every once in awhile.

In other words, I like how you represent him on this story. :-)

Even despite the little rule breaking he is doing.
person polka dot
schedule October 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think Harry maybe is a corrupt auror now, what he's done is definitely illegal, letting Malfoy in with Kingsley.
schedule October 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter. But couldn't they in theory bring him back since while they did destroy the pieces of soul outside his body, the one that remained inside his body was never actually destroyed, he was just killed. After all, if simply dying killed you, they wouldn't have ghosts. Though...I suppose that thought kind of goes against the destruction horcrux's but when you think of it along that line, its more setting them free, giving them a chance to reform in the afterlife...either way, great chapter.
person Nightlo
schedule October 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Does somehow the kidnap of Lucius realte to this horrible case? The revival of Voldermort in Lucius's body? Maybe my own imagination is running too far ahead...
person Nightlo
schedule October 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It is really ironic that I catch up this story first...I am wondering why does Draco deny his own attraction towards Harry? BTW, I like this Harry, he really is funny!
person polka dot
schedule October 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmm but wouldn't the wards have noticed Malfoy? How did he get in the cell?