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by Lomonaaeren

schedule November 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That a fancy spell. And wouldnt it be fun if Kingsley was providing Lucius every comfort :P (for whatever reasons there might be) or maybe just to keep him away from Death Eaters. :)

Liking this, and still the ever growing dynamic between Har and Draco. Its nice. In your story Harry is quite dominant, I'm thinking that is going to bite me later on if anything *cough* happens. (Cos I like a bottom Harry) Though, I am totally not telling you how to write the story, and you might actually make me like a submissive Draco lol. That is assuming there is sex at all, I cant remember the description from when I started to read this.

Anyway, babbling now, so will see you next chapter.
person jujukitty
schedule November 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
omg, so loving this story! i love harry's quirky ass sense of humor and i keep giggling along at the stuff he comes up with. not to mention poor flustered draco when harry manages to get to him lol. and now a really interesting kink in the theories and somehow i'm figuring everyhting is all linked more than we can tell as of now. and omg harry and his "i oughta become a Dark Lord just to teach them a lesson" is so freaking hilarious to me. keep up the great work, i can't wait to see more of this!
person SParker
schedule November 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #13...

It almost sounds like some type of...love scandal of some sort? O_o
Either way, that was kinda unexpected.
person js
schedule November 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the chapter. My favorite line in the chapter had to be when Harry patted Draco's hand and said,
person polka dot
schedule November 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I bet Kingsley wants more power to kill Harry.
schedule November 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
le sigh, i can sympathize with har. naivety, ignorance and stupidity of that level has to hurt to be around but in crime fighting force, it really is unforgivable. still, there's only so much you can do. on the plus side at least their brain hurting stupidity is work for har rather than against. :P
schedule November 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ha I love that, and to be fair its about time that Harry bloody Potter started using his fame (of course for the benefit of others and not himself as is the Harry way)

Love this chapter, hope it keeps up being as interesting in the future. :)
person Night Owl
schedule November 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is -at times- confusing but so very entertaining! I can't wait to read more of what twists Harry can throw into Draco's life. ;) I imagine it will be all the more interesting for the non-hero's efforts!
schedule November 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaaaay keep it up! Love following this one. :D
schedule November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i'll say. i'm amazed har's auror superiors managed to 'handle' him. Then again, malfoy is such a prissy, snarky little puss. i'd say it was more har handling malfoy than vice versa.
it'll be interesting to see how this latest plan flies.