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by onecelestialbeing

person Anonymous
schedule November 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I'm so glad you're back and okay!!! I love your writing and was disappointed that it seemed like it would be another great, unfinished story. 

schedule November 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

So long since an update, hopw you do!

person Scotland
schedule September 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I have read this story 3 times now. The way in which you have captured Snape is outstanding. When reading I totally believe that this is exactly how he would be. You have a very keen eye. I hope you're feeling better. & your mum is still on the mend. My mum had 2 strokes. Thankfully she only lost a few words but it's a very scary thing. Keep up the good work. Take care xxx

person seersama
schedule August 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM

your talant goes beyond words. Sitting on the edge of my seat patently waiting to see what happesn next.

person MzPearlz
schedule August 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I've read your stories before (I use this penname almost everywhere so if you've seen it before , that's me!) And I love every single one of them. But this story right here. *add thunderous dramatic theme noises* I'LL DIE IF YO DON'T FINISH THIS, PLEASE CONTINUE WHEN YOUR NOT SICK AND ALL. I give you so many props for dealing with adult life and sickness and all of it and still coming back to write for us! This story has been up for years (yo, I read this for 2 weeks sporadically,  and I saw Hurricane Sandy and was like...wha? So long ish ago) and this is my first time seeing it (I latched onto your other stories I knoe cause I remember your penname and I'm gunna lurk on your facebook to send you "get well!!" Wishes) I wish that I had seen this story before but I love what you're doing and keep it up! (When you can!) Hope this paragraph makes up for 64 reviews! 

-dying over stress of current cliffhanger-

--MzPearlz

person Fox
schedule August 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Celestial, where are you? Are you all right? Come back!

Please...

Fox xx

person Anonymous
schedule July 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Literally breathless reading this. It's my 4th re read!  Please update soon!!! 

person Fox
schedule July 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
My dear, please continue soon, because I don't think I can wait very long for an update. I will wait for as long as needed, of course, but I'm sure you understand, how anxious I am to read more. The story is absorbing, exciting and simply wonderful. I really need it. I do hope you decided to save him and possibly find a way for Hermione to regain some balance and master her new skills. Hope to read another chapter soon. And hope there is no more dramas in your life, we all know, you had more than your fair share. Love. Fox xx
person Fox
schedule July 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 56. OMG!!! NOOO!!!
person Fox
schedule July 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 58. I came to the conclusion, that you love torturing your readers. Fox