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for Unintentional Inveiglement

by onecelestialbeing

person Anon
schedule October 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Don't leave us hanging here!!
person snape1sh
schedule October 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes! Snape lost his cool...so damn hot.
person csketch
schedule October 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, can't wait for more. It's fantastic so far. :D
schedule October 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just started the story and I have to say that it is rather interesting. But why doesn't she create any potions? Clearly Hermione has her things with her, and potions are something she is good at. Plus, it is clear that he is going to keep coming back hurt. So one would think she would create some pain potions for him at the very least. And a fever reducing one after the last incident. Not to mention maybe a blood replenisher or two. They may not be able to completly help, but it is certainly a start neh? Anyways, good job. Looking forward to reading more.
schedule October 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am so enjoying this story. The very "wrongness" of it all should be a bad thing, but somehow, you make it delicious. Thank you! HG4eva
person Missycam
schedule October 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fuck! Fuck!! Fuck!!! That was fuckin hot!!!
I hope you'll write more soon because I might die soon.... ;-P

Great chapter as always! ;-)
schedule October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
KINKY
schedule October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fuck that was hot.
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Omg I'm loving this story I can't wait to read more :)
person Anon
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE it! Please update soon!