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for Unintentional Inveiglement

by onecelestialbeing

person Anon
schedule October 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
SO GLAD YOU UPDATED!! MORE ASAP!
schedule October 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please let her get pregnant anyway!
person melkS
schedule October 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i love it!!!!!!
keep on! i cn't wait for the next chapter!!!
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Please update soon!
schedule October 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better and better. I love the slow build up to the main event. I hope she can get him kissing more.
person Missycam
schedule October 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Ohhhhhh! Bloody Fucking Hell!!!!
I LOVE your writing!!!!! :-D
That was fucking hot!!!

Please tell me you will be writing more soon?! ;-)
person anyesha
schedule October 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
amazinggggggggggggg............this is awesome......oh please make severus do more..where hermione donot habe to initiate but snape does the naughty stuff.....and i hope when they go to hogswart they do more and more naughty stufffffffffff yeahhhhhhhhhh
person snape1sh
schedule October 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved the kiss. I can't wait them to kiss more.

And ohmygod that was hot.

Is she going to wake up curled up against him...gahhhh
person nightqueen
schedule October 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! This story is sooooo awesome! I love the way that both characters are portrayed!! I love the banter between Severus and Hermione and OMG Do I love the sexual tension! These scenes are sooo unbelievably hot!! More Please!!!
schedule October 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love everything about this story! Absolutely everything. Your writing style is amazing, the way you portray Snape is perfect, and the sex is so delicious. I would really enjoy seeing their "relationship" continue at Hogwarts in some way. Who doesn't like detention sex? ;) Keep up the good work! *feeds your muse some cookies*