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for Unintentional Inveiglement

by onecelestialbeing

person darkside
schedule October 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please please please update!!!!!!!!
schedule October 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So far, one of the best stories I have ever read; and that is saying something. Fantastic. Friggen hate the cliffhanger though. you are a tease. update soon please!!!!! I cant wait for Hogwarts to start. And I really hope you contiue to write this story for a long time (but update regularly!!!) Great job.
person ZenZen
schedule October 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Noooooo! You cannot do this. SO close! *sigh*.

Excellent story - as always.

And I hope you don't mind me saying, but I think it's Inveiglement - with an i.:-)

Hope you update soon!
person Missycam
schedule October 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh thank you for this update it made my day ;-)
I can't wait to see the big show now ;-P

Update ASAP please :-)
schedule October 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG, what a chapter.. That was amazing. Thank you for all the hard work and time you put into it. Not one minute was wasted I assure you. I think I have to go back and re-read it from the beginning again there was so much to take in.

And by the way, it was the perfect place to end it. The next chapter I am sure is going to be more than I could hope for.
person Anon
schedule October 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I literally check this site daily for an update!!! love this story so much! so sexy ;)
schedule October 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just so you know, I think it's pretty impressive that you've managed to encompass all that is taboo about the situation, while still somehow making it seem inevitable. Good for you!! I hope neither of them regret the step their about to take, as there's no going back from it. And, I hope he starts to see more to the situation than simply relief and his own bad judgement. I know he sees more in her, so I hope that comes out soon. I don't see her being able to keep her feelings out of it all and she could get badly hurt if he's not careful. Man, I am over-thinking this too much. lol Great job and thank you! HG4eva
person melkS
schedule October 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wooooow! it's finally going to happen! they are so sweet together!
keep on i beg you!!!!!
schedule October 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Seriously? You leave us hanging THERE of all places? How cruel! Great chapter. Well, chapters as I ended up reading two. Loved hearing about Ron and Harry's impromptu art class XD
schedule October 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far. It really becomes aparent when the authors' have read the books; makes reading the stories so much better. I also love how you don't make Snape into some pathetic whinner, or that he has always loved Hermione. He is true to character. My favorite Snape/Hermione stories are of when Hermione is still at hogwarts pre-HBP. I never liked the ones where Hermione had already graduated. It misses the whole point of Snape's appeal. Can't wait to read more. Update soon!