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for Unintentional Inveiglement

by onecelestialbeing

schedule November 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
so good. so so good.
schedule November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA....I love it...i love this story! you SOOO neeed to update more often! i'm going insane.
schedule November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Backtracking is always fun lol. Thankfully, my family has gotten past the point of caring anymore. Good chapter. Ron really is an insensitive ass sometimes.
schedule October 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It is really sad after that deliciously long and wonderful update, that all I have to say is, "Wow. Yeah. Brava!!" I am really glad it got so much better for her. ;-) Thank you, HG4eva
person Missycam
schedule October 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU!!!!

Amazing chapter, very realistic and pleasant and I want MORE, please ;-D
schedule October 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, I am glad that you went with a more realistic first time. I rather hate those first time stories where everything goes perfectly. Looking forward to reading more. It really is a shame more guys don't realize how enjoyable that position is after sex though. They would make a lot of girls happy if they just stayed put. All well, boys are boys.
person wide_open_spaces
schedule October 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've never been so excited for an update :D loved it!
person thefunnyfaceo_O
schedule October 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I adore Severus and Hermione pairings especially yours :) just finished Broken Dreams and cant wait to read more of this one
schedule October 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow so glad i found this again. i think it was removed from that stupid fanfiction site. why they bother allowing an M rating I don't know i cant fathom what their definition of M is. mean of u to leave us hanging though : ((((
person Anon
schedule October 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read more!