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person anyesha
schedule December 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
you r bloooooooody brilliant ...........MERLIN THAT WAS AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE please make severs jealous now..............the dance with hermione and cormaccccc............................snape jealous takes hermione.......does it and oh soooooooo hot.....merlin awesome
person Missycam
schedule December 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah ah!!! At least they're going somewhere....
Update soon please ;-)
person Alyssa
schedule December 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
HOT story!!! I wish I could have been in her shoes!
person Missycam
schedule November 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah ah!!! Nice chapter but I want some smut please ;-P
Update soon pretty please :-)
person wondelaland
schedule November 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
:) hmmm wondering how things are going to work out! Can't wait to read more
person Sam
schedule November 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Haven't read anything better in the fanfictiondom in ages. Excellent writing. Keep it coming.
schedule November 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, even knowing it's a wrong relationship and that he is actually doing the right thing, I feel so badly for Hermione. She's young, confused, alone and hurt. He could have at least tried to give her a goodbye or explanation or something. Sigh... I don't know what I want for her, except to not be so crushingly broken because of it all. Once again I say, "Sigh..." But, thanks for the update! :-) HG4eva
person Anon
schedule November 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You've got to write some more ASAP! It's the only thing that's going to get us uni students through finals! Give us some good details and get them back together somehow! God we're going nuts here with you keeping them apart!!
person anyesha
schedule November 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
please make severus jealous............the valentines day ball...with cormac would be amazing!!!!!! please dont take toooooooo long for the update ....please take a bit of less time to update........cant wait to see what happens now
schedule November 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh Hermione, Hermione...jealousy always works...