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by onecelestialbeing

schedule February 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Your readers are still here (...at least I am! LOL)

Still loving the story and looking forward to more...just a crazy-busy time of year for me, so I haven't been reviewing.

Can't wait to see what happens next!

PLEEEEEASE!

Prettyprettypleasewithacherryontop?...Soon?!

-S
person padfootfan
schedule February 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
LOVE THIS STORY. I check every week for an update and am always satisfied. I was so upset with Severus in this chapter because one minute he's saying he'll apologize and the next he's insulting her. Blah. I'd say Hermione needs to show him that she could easily do the same and be with someone else.
person smilingfaces
schedule February 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved it!
person Nightqueen
schedule February 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter I loved the story of Mr. Henry and the sound advice Hermione's mother gave her to look deeper into a person and not to rely on what is on the surface. My own mother has given me similar advice over the years and it has proven true again and again. I love this fic as a whole and I love the way you've written both characters! Hope you're doing well and I can't wait to read your next chapter.
person chester
schedule February 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loves this chapter. Hell, I love this story. I was up in arms when I read the previous chapter but this chapter is so insightful into Severus. I really look forward every week to reading the next chapter. I only ask one thing - happy ending and it works out between Severus and Hermione. By the way....love the lemons. Definitely gives me new ideas to try out!
person StarFire
schedule February 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
We're still here!! We're still here!! Another fine chapter, my dear! I absolutely love this story!! Keep up the great work and thank you so much for sharing it with us.
person Aranel
schedule February 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh I am so not done with this story, nor am I bored. Breaks my heart to see this side of snape, I really don't make a habit of reading about hermione and snape but this story just has a grip on me. I kinda don't even miss Draco or Harry, my usual go to shippings with hermione. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person KisaKnox
schedule February 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I always get so excited for Thursdays because you've updated. ^_^ I love this story, as well as all your others. Thank you for writing! <3
person Missycam
schedule February 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh cliffie!!!!
Nice chap BTW ;-)
Thanks!
schedule February 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry so few people are reviewing. I am still enjoying the story, though. Sigh... I don't think he gets it at all. That was NOT an apology. Not that I would expect it in class, but treating her like trash is the complete opposite. I'd like to think they could somehow make it through in the end, but he is making it very difficult. Thanks! HG4eva