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February 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story and I follow it closely each time you post. However, in this chapter you almost forgot these people were witches and wizards. Hermione could have moved Severus from the dungeon corridor with a simple levicorpus spell. She could have done more with magic while they were in his laboratory. This way, they behaved more or less like ordinary people. You should check the cannon more.
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February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Amazing chapter!
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February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just wanted to say that I absolutely love this story! It's taken me nearly 8 hours to read it all but I just couldn't put it down! Looking forward to the next chapter. C
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February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderful! I've been following this one since Chapter 15? I don't remember...anyway please keep up the great work! I love how you keep to Snape's character in the novels but still make him absolutely adorable! Definitely made me chuckle that he's in all this pain but he's more concerned about Crookshanks' name lol.
If I have one wish for this story, it would be that you don't abruptly end it like the writer did for "Snape's story" on this site. Please don't do that, this story is too good to have an ending like that...
If I have one wish for this story, it would be that you don't abruptly end it like the writer did for "Snape's story" on this site. Please don't do that, this story is too good to have an ending like that...
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February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you My Dear for spoiling us with these last two chapters. Wonderfully written as always. Poor, poor Severus having to witness such horrible situations. However, I'm so happy that Hermione always seems to find him. I was thrilled to see that Severus trusted her enough to brew the potion for him. This story has just pulled me in, and I'm always looking to see if you have updated. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with us. Keep up the good work and I certainly can't wait for more.
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February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh Fuck!I hope he will be okay....
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February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh snap a cliffhanger !! ?
My little heart can't take it!! Lol can't wait for the next chapter
My little heart can't take it!! Lol can't wait for the next chapter
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February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Have I mentioned that I hate Voldy? No? Well, I do! Poor Severus. I hope Hermione can get him fixed up quickly and that she doesn't catch pneumonia while doing it. Thank you! HG4eva
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February 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering when you were going to bring up Lily.
This is brilliant. You're lemons are so zesty! They get me all flustered haha.
I enjoy it though, even without any smut.
You've got Snape pegged, I like how difficult you're making his double life sound - never read it written like that before, even in regular un-smutty fanfiction lol.
I like their relationship though I do wish that just once Hermione didn't go running to Snape and begging for it or even just wanting to talk - just the once It'd be nice if he went to her.
Well done, well done.
This is brilliant. You're lemons are so zesty! They get me all flustered haha.
I enjoy it though, even without any smut.
You've got Snape pegged, I like how difficult you're making his double life sound - never read it written like that before, even in regular un-smutty fanfiction lol.
I like their relationship though I do wish that just once Hermione didn't go running to Snape and begging for it or even just wanting to talk - just the once It'd be nice if he went to her.
Well done, well done.
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February 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I for one love the story and am glad you keep posting! It's great to get some insight into everything. Tho the ending.....not what I expected. Can't wait for more