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Oh bloody hell. I was HONESTLY going to post a review, ranting on about how much I missed this story, begging you to update soon and hello! You've updated!
It's a giant, crazy coincidence but I'm so bloody happy!
I liked this chapter. Well, I liked the cliffie - everyone loves to hate a cliffie. Especially ones like that. It was filled with drama and action and the end was so... I dunno. Gasp-worthy. I'm glad Hermione got hit with a curse - as horrible as that sounds. It feels like her being attacked will force Snape to confront his feelings for her - in a more emotional way. I love that. I've been waiting for some fleshy romance from them for a while.
I'll be honest - at first I sort of wished you had played up Snape's jealousy in previous chapters, but it works so much better the way you've written it. I dunno, there's an honesty in Snape/Hermione's "relationship". I mean, there's no games and they get each other. I like it.
I sort of gloss over the bits where Hermione goes about her everyday life with Ginny and Harry. I guess I'm not into the story for those parts even though I know they're important for the Fic.
The internal contemplation/reflection drags sometimes - dont hate me! Just telling you what I think.
I got into this for the smut - because why else would I be on adultfanfic - but I love it for the story.
I really like this story - cant wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work :)

Awesome!
What's next now?! ;-P

Thank you!

Nice ending with their clothes on ^_^ please update soon and wish you will soon feel better. Love love love you!

I love reading this story and I love how committed you are to your stories but, darnit girl, get a little mp3 recorder and record all your ideas until your wrist is well enough to operate again. It needs rest. Or get a friend to transpose for you a bit to let it rest. We'll still be here when you come back, I promise. <3

Gah! Every couple of days I can't help but check for a new update and complain that you don't write this wonderful story faster! And then feel bad... <.< Get well soon!
I absolutely love the way you write the characters, they feel so canon that it is like rereading the books themselves. I can honestly say that each new chapter makes me more anxious, knowing the things that are to come, and yet more excited to see what your take on them will be.
Keep up the great work! Update faster!!.... Okay, update as you can... We want your wrist to heal after all ;)

Cute chapter.

Nice usage on the canon story. I felt badly for all involved all over again. And, I liked Severus and Hermione just needing to be together in the silence. Thank you! HG4eva

I was enjoying this story for quite a while. But I'm going to be honest here - I'm not really liking Hermione all that much. It's clear she doesn't respect Harry, or even seem to like him much. She considers Ron her best friend, but has no consideration as to the girlfriend of her 'best friend' when he's been hit with a love potion and a poison. She's upset that Harry is using a used potion text to his benefit, all the while she's shagging the professor who's margin notes Harry's benefiting from. To be frank, Hermione's actions and statements in Book 6 in canon put me off; perhaps now that the focus is solely on her, the personality traits she exhibited in canon are more evident, thus putting me off further. I do think she's well suited for Sev, though. Both are intelligent, sneaky, snarky about peers, and hold others to low expectations and even less respect. A perfect match.

I think your story is very well written, and engaging. It's just Hermione's thoughts that have turned me off some. I'm not sure if I will continue through to the end, but I do wish you luck.

Wow! Thank you for all your efforts
I love the chapter's ending

First off I hope you're feeling better! Hurt wrist and all this story becomes more amazing with each chapter. I felt bad for Ron, I wanted to smack Lavender and shake Dumbledore!! But my favorite moment was the end!! These two love each other something fierce! I know nothing has been said but actions really do speak louder than words. That small moment of true intimacy was so heart felt and moving it made my own heart skip a beat! I really do adore this tale and as always I can't wait for more! Take care of yourself!