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by onecelestialbeing

person Anon
schedule January 5, 2020 at 12:00 AM

New chappy, whee!  And glad to hear that Hermione will not have to take up a career as a mime. ^_^

Glad to have you back.

schedule September 30, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I'm in love with this story. I started reading 2 weeks ago and had to yell at myself to put down my phone to get some sleep for work. My room echoed when I screamed at realizing chapter 69 was the last chapter so far. I really hope you come back and continue writing, your so articulate! Thank you for the wicked awesome journey! 

schedule August 20, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Hands down this is the best snamione story I've ever had the pleasure of reading! 

schedule April 14, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Yay yay yay yay - you're back. Oh I love this. I had changed computers and lost all my bookmarks and only came around ro restoring everything now. And then I saw that a new chapter was up. This made my day! I love that things are on the way up. H & S so deserve all the goodness to come after the hardship. I love Filch! Ahhh, thank you for a new chapter my dear :-)

person DarkJoy
schedule March 16, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I’ve been enjoying indulging my love for Snape vía fan fiction for the past fortnight and this is my all-time favourite! Great character study, exciting mesh with the canon universe but enough AU info to keep us there... but where is the end? Come home H! We miss you! 

Thank you so so so much for writing this despite what sounds to be a terrible time really. Kudos! You literally made my life so much more fun for an entire week with this tale 💖

person Celesta
schedule February 4, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I created an account just so I could leave this story a well deserved review. The story is fantastically done and keeps you reading even if your eyes are burning from exhaustion (I can speak personally on that one). I’ve already read the story twice but this is the rare one that I can keep coming back to over and over. You’re a fantastic writer and I’m patiently waiting for the next update :) 

person AcBoston
schedule January 26, 2019 at 12:00 AM

So, I started reading this story 11/27/2017 when I started my career as a federal employee.   I read the story in it's entirety and then my father fell ill, had mutiple strokes that left him partially blind and talking like the Sweedish Chef.  Bork Bork Bork. 

During the recent government shutdown I picked the story back up and read from the begining.  Usually I find repeating something I've previously done rather taxing, but this story is brilliantly constructed, I do not mind reading it 1000x over until its completed, even when I am dealing with extreme vertigo.  XD

Worth the wait.  

I hope you are in good health and this slow steady journey continues....forever as far as I'm concerned.  

person Anon
schedule January 20, 2019 at 12:00 AM

So I can't honestly say why I avoided reading this story for so long.  I think the first time I saw it in the update feed, it was something along the lines of 50 chapters, and I was like "Fuck, I'm not reading that much!"  But earlier this month it popped up for the latest chapter, and after a few days I thought "Well, lemme give it a try."  And I quickly found I was going to have to ration myself to 5 chapters a day if I wanted to get any sleep. ^_^  (Except for today, when I read from 55-69)

I fancy myself a writer of some middling talent, and this is, without hyperbole, one of the finest fics I've ever read.  Everything about it is spot-on; the characterizations, the plot, the smut, the humor.  You may only average 10 chapters a year, but from what I can tell, every one of them was worth the wait.  Bravo, and I look forward to the next chapter.

schedule November 4, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Such an amazing story! Are you going to update it anymore? I’m dying to know what happens next. *begging*!

schedule November 1, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This is such a good story, I've got so caught up in it that I was reading every single day after work and looking forward to it. My wand is 100% up PLEASE PLEASE keep writing more! I need to read more!