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for Unintentional Inveiglement

by onecelestialbeing

person Grace
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I've just read all of this in one go... Wow, you're a very good author. Sorry to hear about wristy, I hope it gets sorted. Please update soon!
person StarFire
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good God Woman.... Rip my heart out and claim it why don't you! Can't wait for more, I hope wristy gets better soon! Thank you for this wonderful story! Lots of Love.
person lemonade
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!! It's sort of romantic that he wanted to see her one last time and that he knows she loves him. I know, I know he stopped her from saying it, but that's only because he already knows deep down. *sniff* I think he needed to see that.
person Nightqueen
schedule September 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG my heart just broke for both of them. They love each other and I swear they both know it too! Goodbye sucks especially since neither one truly wanted to say it. Severus thinks he's protecting her and she just wants to be with him. Together they could be truly formidable, apart I think they will become more of a distraction. I've told you before this is one of my favorite stories!!! I hope every thing works out with your wrist. I'm sending lots f well wishes and good thoughts to you!!!
person Poopiehead
schedule September 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is unbelievably good! Seriously, I just love reading it--everything seems so thought out and well-written, and the characters' feelings and thoughts are practically tangible. I can't wait to read more, you are a very, very talented writer!
person serasvictoria666
schedule September 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WOW! that was amazing. first HP fic ive read and I love it! especially the pairing.
definitely looking forward to reading more of this fic and your other stories. :)
and i hope your wrist is feeling better.
person Missycam
schedule September 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
My heart is breaking for the both of them
Thank you for the chapter anyway
person lemonade
schedule September 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Poor them! It's a bad situation for everyone. Damn Dumbledore. I wonder if she'll have the nerve to owl or patronus him. It might be tricky to patronus him, because she never knows when he'll be with the dark lord.
schedule September 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'll say this my dear, you do have a way of mastering their characterizations. Snape's breakdown was touching. It's really deep and moving, something he would indeed be mortified by should anyone ever know of it. Thank you for this brief indulgence. You've wholly managed to really capture their essences respectively. Though I do hope there are some brighter times ahead for them. Of course, it's going to get darker before it gets lighter, I imagine. Hope your wrist feels better!
~CC
person LexiBee
schedule August 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. Oh. My god. I love your story so much... I can't words. *falls over* Seriously, I just spent the last couple days reading everything you have so far from the beginning and I'm obsessed. I thought having 42 Chapters to catch up on would keep me occupied enough until your next update but I just couldn't bear to pace myself, I had to gobble it all up at once! I can't wait to see where you go with the story now that shit has hit the fan. Best fic EVAR! For real, you really do these characters justice. <3