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This is by far one of the best stories I have ever read. I cannot wait until the next installment! Seriously, don't stop. If you do I might actually die a little. Snape deserves so much more than JKR gave him, this work satisfies the laws of literary justice that should have been served the first time around. Thank you.

This is an amazing story it has had me completely captivated! Please I have to know how it ends! Don't stop you are an amazing writer!

i am loving this story!!!!! cant wait for more : )

Thanks for the chapter and I hope everything's fine!

I've just discovered this story and have read it over the last few days and I want to say I just love it. My goodness I was gutted at the end of this chapter. I Look forward to the next chapter. Great writing.

Heartbreaking, that's what it is...
Thanks anyway ^^

Don't worry, I'm crying, too. T_T God, that was heart-wrenching.

This chapter was very interesting. I can see it veering away from canon a bit, as Snape killing Dumbledore is no longer common knowledge. And yet, with that visit from Severus, you're setting up his distance from the trio for the seventh book. They never do see each other again...

I will be SO SAD if that holds true. >.>

So happy the story is updated. I hope snape comes back to hermione. Feel.better and keep updating

i cried a little too. so sad!
cannot wait for the next chapter.

Oh dear...you cried writing it...well...we won't even begin to talk about the tears that those of us reading shed. How on earth can he say that it is the last time he'll see her? And what a right bastard indeed! Yes, we should all be very grateful that he risked his life in leaving spinner's end to come and say goodbye to his mussed-haired girl, but he couldn't hold her a moment longer? He couldn't have at least come and tucked her into her bed? For shame indeed! Poor Hermione, if she wasn't beside herself before...though at least you kept his characterization to the letter of consistency. Once again she nearly burst out with those three little words and once again- because he knows he can't admit that not only does he know that she truly does but he might also love her too- he's kept her from saying them. Oh my...I was quite angry at the close of this chapter- but I'll settle down. Eventually. I must say that I really enjoyed your characterization of her father! Everyone chooses to latch onto the mother and make her the go-to parent. It does seem much more fitting that she's a bit of a daddy's girl. So having him be as he is, and witty with his banter with Mrs. Granger is truly a treat! I do hope that our scruffy little ball of orange fuzz is off being wonderful somewhere, perhaps laying low with a spider or has found his way to Spinner's End...perhaps the Headmaster's chambers once Severus returns to Hogwarts...and not that dreadful unthinkable other thing that you mentioned. I do hope that Severus is wrong. Of course we know it isn't the last time that she sees him- though it may be the last time she gets to kiss him until after- well- let's not thing about that either. At any rate, hope the doctor is able to prescribe you something good! Cannot wait for the next chapter.