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by onecelestialbeing

person vicky
schedule July 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am LOVING the story and how its going but i neeeeeddddd more please I keep looking and there is no updates xxx
person Boh-Cat
schedule July 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
In the words of a very aroused Hermione Granger... DONT STOP, PLEASE!!! Update soon please, best fanfic ive read in a long time. Thank you for writing this!!!!!!
person pickles87
schedule July 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hello - I am finally caught up. I did not realize how far behind I had gotten in my reading. Your story is wonderful.
Thank you for adding more chapters.
Hermione's little scare.... I was 50/50 on her being positive but hoping not. Poor thing I guess doesn't realize in the time of stress and reduction in diet that that part of the body will shut down until life is in the balance again.
Sorry for the rambling.
Your story is great. Keep writing.
person Naughty_megs
schedule July 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Just spent the last week reading through this story... Bloody amazing!
Love the writers' version of the story with the Hermione and Snape relationship. It's truly fun to read, I love the clever banter between Snape and Hermione as well as the raunchy sex scenes which are written in a clever appropriate language.
I'll admit to having to define a few words, most likely as I am not used to so many British terms e.g bint, since I am Aussie. But it makes it more realistic which is great.
Can't wait for the rest of this series!
schedule June 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am so insanely happy you have updated! I totally didn't see Hermione's 'situation' coming. Especially since Snape is so thorough with everything he does. I am sitting on the edge of my seat! I can't wait to see how Snape reacts to the news. How will Harry and Ron react? Is she going to tell them the truth? Please please please please please update soon!!!
person Pothead
schedule May 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am RAVING over this!! I LOVE it sooo much. I haven't read fan fiction in two years, but if I had known I was missing out on this I would never have stopped! :D I'm currently on chapter 7. I read all chapters in one go, it was THAT good! ^^
I absolutely love how sensual it is, Snape/Hermione isn't my favorite pairing, but you have me sold! ^_~
schedule May 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful as always<3
person Cinnn.
schedule April 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It's probably one of the best HG/SS stories i've read on this site. How you've kept so close to snapes original character is amazing. I keep wondering what is going to happen next in your story and how you incorperate it in the original one. I don't know how often you update, but i hope it's a lot! thnx for writing, i love it!
schedule April 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely wonderful! I didn't think I would like it at first. While I enjoy a nice juicy lemon, it originally felt devoid of anything else. I am so very glad I kept reading! The way you have kept Snape's persona so close to JK's Snape is amazing! I really love how you have captured what love would be like for him. The emotions of the characters in general throw me for a loop! I forget exactly which chapter I was reading that made me actually cry, but my Husbeast teased me relentlessly for it. I have been checking everyday to see if there is a new update! You have me completely hooked =)
person pinkslytherin
schedule April 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
YES!! i love your story!!!