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for Unintentional Inveiglement

by onecelestialbeing

person lemonade8
schedule September 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Crooks needed reassurance, that's sweet! I'm still worried about what Snape will do when Bella or the dark lord confronts him!!
person Angieint
schedule September 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say how much I love this story! The wait is worth it for each new chapter. I get so captured by your voice you use when you write that when I start reading, it's impossible to tear myself away. Whenever I read something you post, I feel so inspired to work on my own stories. I can't wait to read more, and am waiting anxiously to see what is to come! Keep up the amazing work and I look forward to reading more in the future. :)
person Nightqueen
schedule September 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Words can't express just how much I love this story. To truly see how much Severus loves Hermione is amazing. I love the line where he calls her his woman. I'm hoping when Hermione wakes up he doesn't push her away, thinking it's for her own good or she'd be better off. Please, Please let him realize that together they are stronger!! Love it and can't wait for the next chapter!
person Megan
schedule September 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I have done NOTHING for the past two days except for read this story. I love your take, and I can't wait to see what happens next. Worst cliffy of the whole story so far! Please update again soon! Look forward to reading more from you.
person Nicole
schedule August 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really hoping you are going to keep this story up! I have been reading off and on for the last few months as new chapters come up and the cliff hanger is killing me! Really great writing, and an awesome twist on the characters that keeps them believably in the universe. Love it, please please keep writing.
person r
schedule August 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
oh gosh, i've read this twice (up to the final update) and each time i cry when i get there because i can't gorge myself on your writing.

i really do think this is one of the ultimate hermione/snape fanfics. i have a little issue with your taking of canon plot and placing it into your story verbatim but that's just my personal issue. please update soon, love!
person H-Bob
schedule July 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is a fantastic story. Thank you for writing it! I was so stoked that I found it, it delivered exactly what I was looking for. Your writing really brings it all to life and I think that you have captured the characters perfectly. I hope you keep it up, I would love to see where you take them! You are absolutely fabulous!
person Random Joy
schedule July 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. You make wonderful use of the plot while giving so much more meaning and depth to characters I actually give a shit about. Hopefully you make it to a conclusion, I'm dying for what happens next!
person leahthelioness
schedule July 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh... Bella knows. Looking forward to see how that plays out.
person Bumblebee
schedule July 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm finally caught up. This story is intense.. updates soon please!!