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for Unintentional Inveiglement

by onecelestialbeing

person Anon
schedule March 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I read all.
omg this is good.
Please post more !!!
person Pops
schedule February 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
God, this story gives me so many feels...it's such a beautiful wtitten story!!! I'm terrified of it ending because of snapes fate but at the same time, it's not like I can just stop since this is such an amazing story. Please give me more!!!
person Anon
schedule February 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god...
Just read the first 6 chapters then i had to go to work. . I know what i will Be doing in My 2 hour break.
omg the nerves of her to just do that to him. Omg.
Cannot wait to read what happens when some one Finds out.
How ord is se in the first 6 charterS ?
i AM hooked. My sis told me to read this story se Was right its awsome !!!! ..
schedule February 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
As always, enjoying this story immensely! I hope Severus can bring her back... They need each other, they are great together!! Keep writing, stay warm and stay healthy there in the cold :) looking forward to the next installment!!
person Snapeluscious
schedule February 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I loved every second of this story - came across it for the first time today. Snape's character is superb. I love how you turned the tables, now it is he who is helping Hermione cope. I really hope you continue it asap as I'm dying to read the next chapter. The writing is so gripping, I sat up all night reading it. I thought I had pretty much read every HGSS fanfic scenario there could possibly be but this story is so fresh and I love your explanations and the way you fit in a lot of events within the canon.
Oh, and please don't kill Snape! I'll send you virtual hugs if you don't.
person yoyo
schedule February 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hello, I've read way too many Snape/ Hermione stories, bt this is easily in my top three. I've gotten used to the fact that the next chapters have longer gaps in between (I Don't like it), but please never abandon this story. I've never seen an author that is not JK That has exemplified these characters as well as you have. Congrats and please never leave this story.
schedule February 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
SO - I just started reading this - finished chapter one, and there are 59 more... GAH... Ha ha, well, it
person Trelweny
schedule February 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I think I would love to meet Gerald Galbraith again. What a lovely view into backstory as well as an interesting way of viewing our leading couple's outing.

Thanks for writing.
person Nightqueen
schedule February 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
WOW, my heart strings were pulled very tight with this chapter. I truly hope that Hermione can come back from the horror of what she suffered because Severus is starting to worry me. He's expecting to die and has realized in that same breath that he loves Hermione! I love the way you write! fantastic chapter!!!
person lemonade8
schedule February 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Can you please kill Bella for me? I'd appreciate a really gory one if you can manage it. Now I'm nervous about what she's told Voldemort and how Snape will find out. Shit.