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for Unintentional Inveiglement

by onecelestialbeing

person Rapunzel
schedule February 8, 2024 at 12:00 AM

Is Hermione ever going to do something useful?

person Rapunzel
schedule February 7, 2024 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 37- Can we just kill Harry now and be done with his horrible attitude

schedule September 25, 2021 at 12:00 AM

This story is my whole life right now. It is so well written, so beautiful, and I'm SO sad that Iv come to the end of it. Please someone tell me it will be back one day!!! I need more of this is my life right now. I need a sweet closing chapter at least. Come back!!! I'm still learning how to use the site here so I'm not sure how long it's been but something tells me it's been long. </3

schedule September 21, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Read all 70 chapters of this brill fanfic and it was never completed *cries*

person jshane78
schedule September 10, 2020 at 12:00 AM

I absolutely love this story!!! Four days is how long it took me to read through all 70 chapters, and when I finished chapter 70, I wanted to start over again. I do sometimes re-read books - the HP series being some that I've read multiple times - but I have never wanted to read a story again immediately after finishing it...until now. I have been a fan of HP for many years, but I have only recently found an interest in fan fiction. While the coupling of Hermione and Severus has quickly become one of my favorite scenarios, I have found that many of the stories are not so believable. Unintentional Inveiglement, however, seems authentic enough that I will no doubt re-read it along with every re-read of the original HP series. Your story is the way the story will go in my mind from now on. I'm looking forward to hearing Hermione speak again. It looks as if it's been several months since the last update, so I sincerely hope all is well with you. I wish you the best!

person MrsL120
schedule August 18, 2020 at 12:00 AM

I've just finished chapter 70.  I've laughed, cried, had my heart broken and mended, and may never forgive JKR for not going in this direction with Snape and Hermione.  Please finish this story.  I'm not sure I've ever been this caught up in needing to know what happens next.  Thank you for sharing this with us.  

person amycrown
schedule February 28, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Oh my God I absolutely love this story. This is by far one absolute favorite SS/HG stories ever. I wish I could save it but I can't :( Looking forward's to more chapters. Keep up the awesome, amazing work.

person Shellnet
schedule February 6, 2020 at 12:00 AM

I read it and I am up-to-date since your last update was when I started reading it probably to three weeks at most and I finished 70 chapters please finish the story it's fantastic

schedule January 14, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Soooo, i didnt plan pn reviewing halfway trough, but so far i'm on chapter 50 and i don't even know where to start!

Yours is one of the very few HG/SS storys i've read so far that have a spot on Severus character. Amazing! I love it that he's not sappy or cheesy AT ALL. Because that just wouldn't be an authentic Severus. I'm already dreading chapter 70, and not knowing when you'll finish this thing. But i swear if you finish it i will devour it! Also i'm going to read trough all your other stuff as i truly enjoy your writing!

Lots of love from Switzerland ! 

schedule January 12, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Still such a good story. I hope you get better. I can’t wait to read more. I feel like I’ve read this story 100 times!