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for Gillyflower, Heliotrope and Hemlock.

by Kimmimaru

schedule August 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Plz let Remus be okay plz plz
schedule April 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
ah. anyways, All I really have to say is, is there more?
person Cham
schedule October 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I am glad you are back, although I am sorry for what is happening in your life lately. No worries at all. I still adore any update you are able to produce. thank you so much for everything!
person 8SimpleSecrets
schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Soooo....*super ultra tackle hugs* I loved you before I even read the first chapter, just because you were able to bring a new Harry/Sirius story into play, and with so many chapters already prepared also <3 Let me just put it out there, though: this story is not readable. It is addictable ;) I usually just can't handle to read stories that contain so much raw darkness and gore, but you manage to make me so interested that these details just mix into my reading, improving the experience so much more. You can actually write, and not just write, but paint beautiful images in your little readers minds that stay with us throughout our readings :) I love the backstory that continues to grow with the dimension that the dimension-travelers come from, it's so heart-breaking...but so real (I hope you understand what I am trying to get at).
You have successfully managed to give each Marauder their own personality with their own traits and thoughts of how far they would go for the safety of their world. Also, Harry is as he should be: brave and confident at times (going in with a plan for example) but then he reveals his human side, therefore he is not some super-hero wizard. Though, that would me interesting to figure out what a super-hero wizard would wear... XD getting off track here, oops!
I had so much I wished to say but it is quite late (or early, depending how you consider high in the AM and still not asleep) where I reside, and my brain is shutting down. Thank you for creating such a magnificent piece, I look forward to future installments, and good luck on everything writing! :)
person 8SimpleSecrets
schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Soooo....*super ultra tackle hugs* I loved you before I even read the first chapter, just because you were able to bring a new Harry/Sirius story into play, and with so many chapters already prepared also <3 Let me just put it out there, though: this story is not readable. It is addictable ;) I usually just can't handle to read stories that contain so much raw darkness and gore, but you manage to make me so interested that these details just mix into my reading, improving the experience so much more. You can actually write, and not just write, but paint beautiful images in your little readers minds that stay with us throughout our readings :) I love the backstory that continues to grow with the dimension that the dimension-travelers come from, it's so heart-breaking...but so real (I hope you understand what I am trying to get at).
You have successfully managed to give each Marauder their own personality with their own traits and thoughts of how far they would go for the safety of their world. Also, Harry is as he should be: brave and confident at times (going in with a plan for example) but then he reveals his human side, therefore he is not some super-hero wizard. Though, that would me interesting to figure out what a super-hero wizard would wear... XD getting off track here, oops!
I had so much I wished to say but it is quite late (or early, depending how you consider high in the AM and still not asleep) where I reside, and my brain is shutting down. Thank you for creating such a magnificent piece, I look forward to future installments, and good luck on everything writing! :)
PS I am new to the whole 'reviewing' thing on this website, and I think it only posted a sentence of my review last time so I'm doing it again just in case o.0
person Cham
schedule September 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Simply, amazing! I am enjoyingthis plot sequence. It is definitely different than your other works but I am definitely enjoying every bitof it! You aresimply wonderful! Keep going with this. I really want to know how this all goes down in the end. Thank you so much!
schedule September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OHHH i like this story it is very interesting and i am waiting (as usual) impatiently for an update!!
person qwerty
schedule September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this. is. dark.

but good though

very interesting, definitely original. i love how you took the canon characters and twisted them in this alternate universe. your writing is really well done.

eager to read more! keep going!!