rate_review Reviews

didn't realize i'd missed the last couple chapters. i have to say i was enjoying the story up til the last chapter, then it was like you just got tired of writing and slapped something together (which may very well be what happened). the sex, or the mention of it, after all the build up in the previous chapters was short but alright, some people just don't like writing sex scenes. the "final battle" was even shorter and less dramatic than the battle with voldemort in the first chapter, but fine, you want to just be done with it. and what happened to the guy that overheard their conversation and him reporting to dumbledore? but what really got me, there's NO WAY that after having just had sex for the first time, at the max, a couple hours before that harry would show up pregnant and be feeling the effects, not to mention it's not a great way to leave a story ending. if that truly was the last chapter, it just killed an otherwise good story and i hope you'll consider going back and expanding that last chapter into either a much longer one or two separate ones.

So is this done or will there be more maybe a sequil if this is done? thank you .

Oh that was lovely!!!