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for The Principle of Sympathy

by heerayni

person alexkdp
schedule October 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
when he shuddered, i shuddered. when he gasped, even i gasped!
your descriptions are so vivid - i was so absorbed in the in the story it was almost as if i was there between them feeling everything they were.
this can only be attributed to the way you write. its always in the details! i treasure every word that has been carefully chosen and typed out.
i loved how harry showed vulnerability. he's always depicted as the strong one and i find that i like him vulnerable and susceptible to so much feeling.
CANT WAIT TO READ DRACO NEXT OMG and for him to just walk out of that lift that would have taken ALL his willpower esp since he's so obsessed with harry.
i bet this special friend of his was just that a friend! hhahahahha i cant waitttttt to see whats gonna happen!!
keep the glorious work and (of course!) the smut coming along, mistress....and i'll do anything you want!
your favourite stalker, forevermore.
alex.
person delia cerrano
schedule October 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Noooo I want Harry to be together with Draco! Now Daphne is in the way!!! And Draco is injured...bleeding? I hope the house elf tells Draco that Harry was there and was really hurt? wounded? sad? that he wasn't able to see him.
person Calypso
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful read, immediately got me so hooked that I just had to show my support. Will be waiting for the next updated with bated breath.
person delia cerrano
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that this story will be more about Harry & Draco & less about plot. I hope they will soon stop dancing around each other...measuring each other...and maybe be on the same side against the bad guys. I already don't think I like that Stormstrol guy.
He is too prussian army or german storm trooper.
person CM
schedule October 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah love love love that you updated! Harry is still Grrrrrrr. But Draco's feelings makes my heart ache so painful to love someone who treats you like something worse than dirt and so cruelly. I want to find out who's doing this to Draco and I want Harry to feel like crap for accusing Draco. Please please update soon!
person alexkdp
schedule October 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG im bloody speechless! you left us there with harry pressing against draco in a lift??? and right after he said "come Draco????!?!?!?!" oh my dear god. i am speechless. im lost for words. i'm going to faint.*gasps*
you certainly are an evil evil mistress leaving us right there! that last chapter was just pure genius. i swear. i think i may have dreams about this tonight.

i have read quite a few other stories since you last posted and i've got to confess that i think your writing - in particular the way you write - the quality in which you do it is superb.
mature doesnt quite describe it perhaps more developed than other writers? the way in which you tell the story i grant you is just flawless.

what i did was i re-read the entire story from chapter one in anticipation for the latest chapter you posted so could drag it out longer..if you understand what i mean?
thank you for the mention in your latest chapter! i was completely stunned seeing my name there!!

it would be an honour to be able to count you as a friend and or mistress (hehehehehe..).

i am eternally grateful to the future promise of a great deal of smut as they are my favourite bits when reading Drarry fics.
i am of course not too picky and get so excited (i confess i was squealing when i read that last bit there) even when the hints of smut are sprinkled so thank you for the hint of slight slight smut at then end of your last chappie there!

as Draco said in your chapter four: "...the little Draco, that wants and needs and begs and pleads."
In the same way, this little alex wants needs, begs and pleads for the next chapter.
all my love,
your favourite stalker.
person alexkdp
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
smutsmutsmutsmutsmutsmutsmut! and more smut i say! god, i loved the last chapter.
i also love the way that you switch from harry's to draco's perspective with each chapter throughout the story!
its bloody brilliant as we can actually go through everything thing BOTH of them are thinking - it gives me intense pleasure.
did i mention we need more smut? haha. love the stuff cant get enough of it.
i also loved the way that you did Draco in the shower, it was intense and just auhhhhgggg i dont know how else to describe it but just incredible!
i also love how you've made draco so very brilliant scheming and all and potter like putty in his hands!
and teddy! oh bless him! i adore how he's almost playing cupid between potter and malfoy.

keep up the lovely work and dont you ever dare stop writing or i shall be the one to haunt you if that disastrous day ever arrives.
i hope you've had a great day and will be in the mood to post the next chapter up soon as im SALIVATING for it. btw, more smut! (haha okay i'll stop with the smut requests now).

regards from a grateful and highly excited fan/follower/stalker (which ever one pleases you the most),
Alexandra.
person delia cerrano
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Still trying to figure it all out. I thought this would be more Draco/Harry oriented but it seems to be more mystery oriented with a side line of Draco/Harry. Maybe it's early days. Anyway good job & I will be continuing with you.
person lividfire
schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far, shower scene is intense:D:D:D
person unneeded
schedule September 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i feel a bit sorry for draco, all he's ever done for har is sacrifice and still he gets this crap dumped on him. A very little time indeed. practically non existent.