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for The Principle of Sympathy

by heerayni

person delia cerrano
schedule January 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hads to read it twice & went back to the last chapter & AN's but I'm all caught up & understand it...more or less. Ready for the next. Don't like that Draco is still keeping things from Harry. That can only fester & spoil their new & tentative relationship when he finds out.
person alexkdp
schedule January 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
oooo! cliffy! oh you meanie youuuu. hahaha. the seem so in sync and i think thats amazing. it certainly helps that you write so good too!
very good chapter. i like how you didnt overdo the smut scenes! people tend to get too carried away and too graphic and at times they may be but usually its too much. i liked how you were very subtle with them and didnt go overboard with the entire thing and it was just right - not too little to disappoint either!
Refreshing. a change of pace from any other full blown smut scene ive ever read. and thats a good thing.
i see the excitement coming up. waiting for you to keep your word - to post the following week!
read ya next week!
till then, all my love,
your favourite stalker.
person SP777
schedule January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #17...

Oh, I just KNOW you're going to explain about the flashback in the very near [immediate] future & was
that real for Harry, his connection to Draco? :-)

Wonderful love scene you did, it wasn't over the top AND Harry's reflection was a 'true feel good moment'.

By the way, is the next chapter where we see Draco doing some serious kickass...and finding out the 'D'plan?
person delia cerrano
schedule January 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Such love between them! And so much they need to say and questions to answer. I hope they know...feel... the love they have for each other so that the talking doesn't cause pain but understanding and an even deeper love. Besides, I don't think I could take it if they separated now...no matter what silly self sacrificing reason they make up or how temporary they say it will be. All these chapters led up to such intense feelings on their behalf...nope couldn't take it and neither can they. They told me so.
person SP777
schedule December 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #16

I have finally caught up and it's ALL good! :-]

I've seen your story and wasn't sure what to make of it from
the summary alone. But I gave it a chance & liked how you started
it to the ''it's about time" moment between Harry & Draco.

The idea of Draco being what he is, it is hardly ever done here, so
I really hope to see the end of this journey and not get halfway there,
only to run out of gas, if you get my meaning.

I see that a lot with ambitious plotlines.

I have to ask, will we see more of Tenebra...and the others from the Underworld?
Will we see just what it is Draco can do? Because I am curious. Other than that you have
yourself an interesting body of work here.

Looking forward to seeing what else you have for us.
person alex
schedule December 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMGomgomgomg. THAT WAS INSANE!!
It was so intense. You were right i was jumping and screaming and shrieking and then towards the ending bit i even teared (as in tears in my eyes) up abit towards the end because it was so beautiful and then sighed in relief that it wasnt a dream!
It was one hell of a chapter.
dare i say, your best yet!
and i think you're so clever with words (i know that youve prolly been told this tons) and i thought the bit about the kite was so poetic!
and then the bits where draco was in despair and then just succumbed to it all! it was AMAZING.
it was truly worth the wait - worth the checkiing site TWICE a day hoping that you would update (i kid you not!)
please do write summore.
keep the suspense building and the smut coming and i'll stalk you till the very ends of the earth!
x
your favourite stalker.
person CheektoCheek
schedule December 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is the second time I've re-read this fiction and I love it! Especially the last chapter and I can't wait for the next, love your style of writing and how you made Draco and Harry in this.
person alexkdp
schedule December 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooooohhhh................!!!
You cant have left it THERE! SERIOUSLY. OMG OMG OMG.
I'm literally jumping in my computer seat right.
THAT WAS A F#%^&* EPIC CHAPPIE!
my favourite part was the scarf! and the yellow chiffon! and sex in the shower! and THAT kiss! and the going back to my place.
and i knew that Draco was gonna buy him but not like that - thought he was gonna actually participate in the bids but no he just came in right at the end there and WHAM!
Navy Blue suit with black lapels is classic James Bond :P Excellent choice.

Draco being cold there (something must have happened cant wait to find out what) and then being not so cold towards the end! GEEZ!
I need another hit (ie chapter). You're (ie author) Dangerous. And i'm loving it :D
I can sense the smut. Smell it even ;)
And you got Potter all ballsy and such and you got Draco to say all those things!

Absolutely marvelous.
Keep the writing and i'll keep the stalking.
Your fav stalker,
x
alex
person alexkdp
schedule November 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
you're forgiven because of the promise of a great deal of improprieties which are to take place in the next chappie. hehe.
i love how you brought in teddy and all the kiddies. they seem to add a new dimension to draco.
filler it may have been but it was good!! im neutral on the incest thing and the plot is becoming clearer (nice!).
would love to see more involuntary reactions/actions on either draco/harry's part (smut related of course)
Would it coincide with christmas by any chance? that would be wicked.
fyi i love draco's obsession with harry (part of my stalker tendencies i imagine) and the more intense it is the more drawn i am to it and that was what drew to me your ffic in the first place.
keep the obsession going and dont wait too long to update. the torture and anticipation is unbearable (though i suppose it does add to ny excitement lol).

your (newly appointed) favourite stalker,
alex.

ps. youre my favourite author too. xox
person delia cerrano
schedule November 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That Daphne! She just spoils everything. Teddy has the right idea...vex Harry back. I hope they will start getting together more at the Gala. And that there won't be too much angst. I'm ready for Harry & Draco to start getting into each other..understanding each others emotions & fears. You know - going forward not stalled or stagnating in assumptions & past bad experiences.