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August 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just spent thirty minutes searching for this story, hoping that in the year that has passed since I read it, it would have been completed. Please... Finish this. I would really love to read the entire work. Please.
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December 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I had quite a bit to say about this story, but as I am finishing it on my iPad and having to type this review with two fingers, I'm afraid I'm going to have to keep it short.
Your writing is beautiful, and other than a few grammatical errors that even the best of us can't seem to escape, it is an engaging and thrilling read. This is by far the best HP Fanfiction I have ever had the pleasure of stumbling across. Not only is your writing fluid and the perfect mixture of quick wit and articulate artistry, but the meat of your story has depth as well. There is an actual STORY here to be told, and instead of getting right into the good stuff, you make us sweat a little. You also have an amazing talent of being able to get INTO the mind of the character, especially Draco. Really, it's beautiful.
I was just devastated to realize that it is in fact, incomplete. Please do not abandon this piece. I am very much looking forward to finishing this. You're doing an excellent job and you are quite talented. I am a writer as well, and if you ever get bogged down or uninspired, feel free to email me and have a chat. I'd gladly give you a polite nudge, if you ever need one.
Your writing is beautiful, and other than a few grammatical errors that even the best of us can't seem to escape, it is an engaging and thrilling read. This is by far the best HP Fanfiction I have ever had the pleasure of stumbling across. Not only is your writing fluid and the perfect mixture of quick wit and articulate artistry, but the meat of your story has depth as well. There is an actual STORY here to be told, and instead of getting right into the good stuff, you make us sweat a little. You also have an amazing talent of being able to get INTO the mind of the character, especially Draco. Really, it's beautiful.
I was just devastated to realize that it is in fact, incomplete. Please do not abandon this piece. I am very much looking forward to finishing this. You're doing an excellent job and you are quite talented. I am a writer as well, and if you ever get bogged down or uninspired, feel free to email me and have a chat. I'd gladly give you a polite nudge, if you ever need one.
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February 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ohmy dear draco. poor thing. so sensitive. so vulnerable. i loved that. i loved the quickie in the powder room but i loved more how that one kiss made all fade all in comparison. i loved how harry realised he was being a douchebag when he laughed. At least he realized it though I am very grateful for that. to save harry's life eh. looks like harry will love draco even more now! positively adored this latest chapter. i also liked ginny - the topper?! hahahaha. awesome. and omg whos that imposter?! and apologies for not reviewing the last chapter - i have been so busy with things. this will change - i am yours in the next update. great job in writing the last two chappies. just the right amount of smut without overdoing it and the emotion...! it has me heart pulling in all directions! oh my poor heart. but it was amazing - all the emotion it invoked! omg.
keep it up and am looking forward to the next one.
all my love to my favourite author
x
alex
keep it up and am looking forward to the next one.
all my love to my favourite author
x
alex
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February 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
poor Harry
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February 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG THIS IS SO COOL!
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February 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is the most intense chapter and I completely love it!
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February 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is so.... I don't even have the words... it just draws you in and then you'd be needing more. Wonderful update as always. Will be waiting for the next installment
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February 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #19..
What started out as an introspective chapter, turned into a chapter
that had some revelations for Harry.
It's always good to see a Harry that shows some restraint, but is also quick in
the uptake...at this point in his life he would have to be, especially being an
Auror. I, also, hope to see him take his revelation on what he thought on Draco
and act on it....by LISTENING & getting to know him. :-)
Also, I'm going to pass on being on the email list. It's something I've never done, I
would just rather wait on the update as they come. Besides I have like 5 stories I'm trying
to read at the same time, which is crazy to me sometimes. *__*
So, trust me, I got plenty to distract me while I wait... :-)
What started out as an introspective chapter, turned into a chapter
that had some revelations for Harry.
It's always good to see a Harry that shows some restraint, but is also quick in
the uptake...at this point in his life he would have to be, especially being an
Auror. I, also, hope to see him take his revelation on what he thought on Draco
and act on it....by LISTENING & getting to know him. :-)
Also, I'm going to pass on being on the email list. It's something I've never done, I
would just rather wait on the update as they come. Besides I have like 5 stories I'm trying
to read at the same time, which is crazy to me sometimes. *__*
So, trust me, I got plenty to distract me while I wait... :-)
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February 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Whew! They ended up together & smiling! Annnd Harry found out a tiny bit about Draco (Egil & Eric relationship & Eric's wish for Draco which Draco doesn't want Plus what Eric wants him to do).
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January 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #18..
Aww...I feel sorry for Draco for feeling a bit slighted from Harry, but
he must understand deep down that it IS kind of farfetched " Draco Malfoy...a
necromancer?? Yeah, right!"
Anyway, I hope he tells Harry his feelings because nothing good comes out of
misunderstandings...and I hope he tells the truth soon.
Nice scene with Ginny there, though I never did care for her in the books/movies.
I swear it was SO cliched to have Harry marry her of all people. I still feel Hermione
was the better choice, who says any of the redheads had to marry in the first place.
..anyway back on track..
I'm going to have to reread the history on the Brothers one more time to cement it into
my head, but you did a good job putting it together. Also, your characterization of Draco is
perfect. His serious, mysterious persona, mixed with the dry humor is perfect for someone who
became what he is now. Though 2 chapters ago, it seems like he had reverted back to the childish
sixteen year old Draco, during the...charity ball?
All in all, you're doing good with such a complex story.
Aww...I feel sorry for Draco for feeling a bit slighted from Harry, but
he must understand deep down that it IS kind of farfetched " Draco Malfoy...a
necromancer?? Yeah, right!"
Anyway, I hope he tells Harry his feelings because nothing good comes out of
misunderstandings...and I hope he tells the truth soon.
Nice scene with Ginny there, though I never did care for her in the books/movies.
I swear it was SO cliched to have Harry marry her of all people. I still feel Hermione
was the better choice, who says any of the redheads had to marry in the first place.
..anyway back on track..
I'm going to have to reread the history on the Brothers one more time to cement it into
my head, but you did a good job putting it together. Also, your characterization of Draco is
perfect. His serious, mysterious persona, mixed with the dry humor is perfect for someone who
became what he is now. Though 2 chapters ago, it seems like he had reverted back to the childish
sixteen year old Draco, during the...charity ball?
All in all, you're doing good with such a complex story.