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McGonagall is a bitch in need to be s pended from her job corvus needs help but hes had a rough life until he was adopted i kind of hope that mc bitch pays

Good chapter. I had a "duh" moment where I got really confused lol. When I read Charlie, I thought Weasley and was like, why is he pushing Corvus? o.O lol Damn you Dumbledore! Leave Sev alone! In answer to your question, I would have to agree, McGonnagal is a bit too ooc. I mean, even in the books she was still at least fair. What she is doing goes against her job as a teacher though. Looking forward to more!

go corvus so loving this loved how he handle nev that was smooth but the best was the end

i just want corvus to get threw the first five years before he can leave i also hope that the know it all suffer as well

i kind of wish McGonagall get slap down but if she does severus will so fuck her i so hope that corvus shows them all in they learn the truth once he is grown up that would be so cool also love his bond mates but i do hope that the chamber of secret don't happen that corvus finds away around it in that severus in corvus as well as the malfoys get money from it only i would also like to see the potter brat get outed

I love this story. I can't wait to see Corvus eventual revenge. Please let them learn that Harry is the boy shoo lived and that he died.

Excellent I got caught up from Chapter 12 to 16 after getting back from a conference and thoroughly enjoyed the direction and methods you are using. I could not use work devices to visit some of my favorite sites and keep up with my favorite stories :(

Back to Corvus... McGonagall has always seemed blind to what her Lions are and do... so far you have not taken her too out of character. But, I am looking forward to what other blatant favoritism behavior you're going to have her display and love the thought of what a comeuppance she'll received. I can see (or so I believe) the foreshadowing you are laying for when Slytherin's snake makes an appearance in Chapter 16 with the board of governors and Dumbles and some of the possible headaches and heartaches for Corvus. Please continue to give us your wonder plot twists anytime you want and every chapter is welcome whether small or large.

LOL! But of course Severus don't laughs, can't wait to see what happens next so please update chapter 17 soon ^_^

Good? It sounded great. You were able to make something up yourself and have it still sound logical. Many can not do that. Now, as to the latest three chapters. Amazing as always. Only one mistake that I could tell as I was writing. When the Lestrange family went to the station and Cor's raven flew around, you wrote down twice that he flew before landing on his masters shoulder. Each written a different way, but it is still there. Poor Hermione though, I feel that was a bit harsh. It seemed she was just eager to be helpful. I understand that Cor is defensive but its a bit intense. He isn't even giving people a proper chance to explain or apologize. Instead, he is coming off quite arrogant and rude himself. Not a good first impression. Now, pardon me while I smack McGonagal. *wanders off and comes back moments later* Much better. As an animagus that would should be a bit kinder to animals, especially magical ones -.-

I like that Cor is in Ravenclaw but still trying to divide his time up equally between houses. I can't wait to see what kind of late night conversations may come from him and Rowena's portrait. I do have to wonder though, if given the chance, would Hermione take the opertunity to take the other history class instead of the normal? It seems like something she would do given her "equal rights" and booksmart thing. I could even see McGonagal not telling her it was an option (as if I remember correctly she is the one who talks to muggleborns and their family) as a way to further influence people.

Anyways, great chapters. Looking forward to more! I hope Cor gets along with Hagrid at least! The man is just too sweet!

I'm really enjoying your story it's very well written! I also love the way it flows! Can't wait till the next update!