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December 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
great story can't wait till the update.
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December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Look, just that can do those that can't teach or become critiques. Write your fic so it seems right to you not to please the masses who can't or won't.
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December 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like your story - definitely a twist. I don't know how I feel about the Hermione bashing. I guess I was not expecting it. But I am curious if you will continue it or have them have a change of heart. I also am curious if the dark wizards will change. I understand about preserving culture and heritage but not at the cost of others' lives. But really enjoy the story so far.
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December 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Look I'm just glad you are posting. I do like how you keep everyone in the story.I'm sad Cor has to suffer though. He needs more help like i don't maybe getting the heir of Ravenclaw gives him a time of diplomatic immunity. He could discover it in one of her journals since she was a seer . And you know take it from there. Not trying to tell you how to write it just saying what popped up in my head.
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December 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Cor is acting odd o.O All well, I am sure all will be explained. Maybe he is just stressed lol. Poor Sev, having to be on the receiving end of that though lol. Granted, seeing him shocked would be funny. Great chapter. The miss-spelling confused me, but I got it later lol. Looking forward to more hun! Also, wicked idea for Draco to trick them!
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December 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you are doing your story. Corvus finally getting fed up didnt seem out of character. I was really surprised he put up with it for so long even though he is such an introvert and was getting no help. I love this story. It is fun to read and it flows really well. If you need a beta I wouldn't mind looking over your story. I've never betad before but I am an english major so I could be of some help if you'd like. Just shoot me an email if you want me too.
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December 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh I'm so glad you updated. I was starting to worry. Corvus is such a Slytherin when dealing with Dumbles, love it. I was hoping that Flitwick would have a bigger role in Corvus' Hogwarts life but I'm sure you have plans. Can't wait to find out whether Hermione will be around. Great work
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December 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oooo Corvus is going to stir up some trouble upon entering Hogwarts, isn't he? Great chapter!
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December 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yes! More! Finally! lol. Hi, glad you are back! I love this story soo much. Glad to see Corvus is making friends finally and that he got to one up Potter and Dumbles. I can not wait to read more! You're story is amazing hun. *hugs*
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November 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter. It has nice setup and McGonagle is not out of character yet, but if she actually sees Potter hex Corvus and does nothing, she'd be OOC, IMHO. However if she sees Potter hex Corvus and Corvus complains, her giving them both detention is totally within character. After all, she did it to Draco in book 1.