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January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Why must they save the idiot duo? Why not let them, and the wizarding world know what useless beings they are? ..... Well I guess that would kill most of the story line, won't it?
Oh well, please update chapter 29 soon.
Oh well, please update chapter 29 soon.
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January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! I just found it yesterday and have already read up to the current chapter. I can't wait to see more!
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January 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Rita Skeeter!!! I might actually like you!!! That article that was actually all facts and totally slanted to show how bad Dumbledore and Potter are being... you did good!
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January 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! And I just found it today!
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January 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I always anxiously await updates to this story, so please go on! I did find some errors in one place-
Corvus snorted into his tea. At Mandy's look, he read the article out loud. "The publicly announced that they knew their son was bullying others. Listen to this: 'We had no idea the bullying had gone that far'. Their either too stupid to hire a publicist or the one they have is a moron."
It probably should be "They publicly announced" and the proper use of 'Their' should be "They're" since you are contracting they are.
Corvus snorted into his tea. At Mandy's look, he read the article out loud. "The publicly announced that they knew their son was bullying others. Listen to this: 'We had no idea the bullying had gone that far'. Their either too stupid to hire a publicist or the one they have is a moron."
It probably should be "They publicly announced" and the proper use of 'Their' should be "They're" since you are contracting they are.
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January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*sighs* Why must you tease me so? Stopping at such a place is just...cruel! Great chapter though, I loved how he is starting to have visions and is working to piece them together. The Potters really aren't that bright are they. So, I had a question. Was Charlie bullying others as well? I ask because of the other students who seemed to appreciate the articles. Can't wait to read more hun!
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January 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey, loving the story so far, can't wait for more. I just wanted to point out that you had Corvus say 'aunt Cissa' I think you meant for him to say 'mum.'
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January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting instincts Harry got there, please update chapter 28 soon ^_^
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January 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*whines* I wanna read more! >.< Lol, honestly, I just can not get enough of this story hun. I can't wait to see the potters reaction to the punishment. Serves him right, though naturally, he does deserve more. I really find myself hopping that Remus at the very least ends up on Cor's side. He is so level headed and intelligent. He recognizes manipulation and is a fair person. I wouldn't be surprised if dumbles was using magic to control Remus. I could see Cor figuring it out and freeing him from it...anyways, great chapter! Can't wait to read more.
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January 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Now that was brilliant! No Quidditch until the end of third year? Lol