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February 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this sounds like big trouble for our poor Corvus.
Please update chapter 33 soon ^__^
Please update chapter 33 soon ^__^
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February 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You are an evil evil person! Ok, not really lol. Great chapter! I liked Flitwiks speech to his students, though I wish he had included that dark does not mean evil and why that is. I think it may have helped a bit. Can't wait to read more! Lucy, you are in so much trouble when Cor finds out what you did!
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February 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant with putting the translations in parenthesis, next to it, I hate having to scroll all the way to the bottom every time, or worse when they don't even bother to put the translation at all, and when you try to translate it they misspelled it so badly that your lucky if you get 1 or 2 words in the whole sentences. So thank you for not being one of those thoughtless writers ^_^
Please update chapter 32 soon.
Please update chapter 32 soon.
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February 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter! I love that Corvus is coming up with ways to thwart the meddling old wizard and keep his familiars safe. I suspect the puff of black smoke was the piece of Voldemort's soul leaving Corvus.
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February 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have only two words to describe this latest chapter... Absolutely Fantastic!
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February 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wow just wow this is sooo brillint and I really can't wait to see how second year turns out please keep it up....oh and the ravenclaw magic have began to accept him right well what about the other one has it started yet?
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February 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you fo rthe added words I loved the update and look forward to more when you can thank you.
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February 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Post more, post more! lol Great chapters, I absolutely love reading this. A lot of what you write resonates strongly with me and follows a lot of me own ideas on magic, which makes it all the better to read and that much more believable. I really can't wait to read more. There were a couple things I wanted to note quickly
1. "He watched on warily as the boy placed the snake on his shoulders before c" This sentence was incomplete.
2. "When the light faded, both professors blinked slowly to find the on his knees in the center of the circle alone" This one is missing a word I think.
Anyways, great job!
1. "He watched on warily as the boy placed the snake on his shoulders before c" This sentence was incomplete.
2. "When the light faded, both professors blinked slowly to find the on his knees in the center of the circle alone" This one is missing a word I think.
Anyways, great job!
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February 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yup! ^_^ Though, don't like that Albus is getting really close to the truth of Corvus identity. Please update chapter 31 soon.
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January 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* Two chapters! So happy right now ^^ Great job hun, loved them both. There is one thing of note, in the 29th chapter you used the name Harry instead of Corvus when Cor was going to explain what happened in the chamber and Dumbles tried to stop him. Other then that, looks good! I can't wait to read more. The fact that you have so many chapters written is just..torture XD I can't wait to read more! I love the twists you are putting on this.