rate_review Reviews

I love your story and I adore the slight change in perspective that you have with your 'dark' characters like Bellatrix and Rodolphus. I also like that you bring to light the headmaster's manipulations and how you make your version of Harry smart without being a rulebreaker, yet still being bullied.

I noticed a tiny perspective error in this latest chapter with Lucius. Where you have "The boy had yet to speak with him, but with summer coming up the blonde hoped to get back into Harry's good graces.", shouldn't that be 'Corvus'?

I eagerly await your next update and hope that it will be soon.

more please more.

Absolutely love this story! Please update chapter44 soon ^_^

I'm so happy you updated! I like where the story is heading!

So glad to see you back... I was suffering from withdrawal symptoms. .

You may call these latest chapters "filler" but I think they advance the story quite well. Not every chapter can be "action" as oft-times a writer just has to stop and explain some things (be it background or detailing out why certain actions were taken but he characters, etc.).

I enjoyed these two chapters just as much as I have all the previous ones and cannot wait until your next posting. I understand that life gets in the way of writing (especially when it's for enjoyment as opposed to a paycheck), but hopefully it won't be so long between updates again.

Keep up the excellent work!

I thought this chapter was soooo interesting!!!! Dumbledore has a clue... I hope that him being so nutty over the Potter boy RIDDLES him with guilt when he realizes that he isn't the boy who lived. Though he probably won't realize that until Corvus actually kills Voldemort. He should drive himself crazy thinking about where exactly he got things so wrong and what he should have actually done. And I want the Potters to live too. I want everyone to know that their arrogance has nothing to back it up and then they can be embarrassed and humiliated for the rest of their lives with the idiot they raised to be such a bullying jerk.

Severus and Bellatrix... still too supportive of the dark lord but they will choose Covus in a heartbeat. Love this story!

OHMYGOSH, I have been dying for new chapters! FINALLY! *hugs* Thank you! Great job hun. I love the way the poor dear was taken care of in the last chapter and how well Corvus is getting along with the goblins. I love how Ginny knows Cor saved her too. I can't wait to see how things develop from here!

Just wanted to say that I really love this story and the characterisation is wonderfull, I was just wondering if there was any way of knowing when an updade would be comming?

This is a very well done piece of writing. I think you should be very proud of yourself - I enjoyed reading this immensely, and I look forward to reading the rest, once you've written them of course.

I hope you never stop updating I love this story and I enjoy the journey you have invited those of us who read this to follow with you.