rate_review Reviews

I liked chapter 12 including the inter-action with the Potters in the clothing and book stores. I did get a little lost briefly with one of the sentences "Narcissa spoke Aurors up when they exited the shop,

Really enjoying the story and just wanted to drop in to tell you. ;)

this is soooo brillint and I love how you have things happening plus now Corvus/Harry has somthing that can really tick of the potters and ron. OSmthing to talk about with Bill W I mean the book he's got has got to have somthing both he and the eldest weasely are intrested in. Plus after spending so much time with the goblins and away from his family Bill has got to not be as 'light' as Dumbles and the potter would like. Anyway please keep this up!

That is true, Corvus does not like a know it all. Maybe if it was explained that she had no friends and that was really the only time she got attention he would be more accepting but who knows. Course, that is simply my theory on Hermione. Great chapters! I'm glad Corvus gets to get out of Binns class as from what I remember, he only talks about Goblin wars. No wonder kids fail. Boo on Mr. Potter, harassing a child like that. Man should be tossed out of the store on his ass in the most public way possible with someone shouting "until you know how to properly treat a child STAY OUT." Glad everyone is standind up to the Potters. It sounds like people are becoming rather annoyed with their "holier then though" attitudes. Can't wait to read more!

so good corvus will go to hogwart than hope he get to do summer school are something like independent studies i also hope that since lily disown her self that rocks i hope disown all them from his family lines

I hope you feel better hun...

You you you...you forgot about us! *cries* How could you Lady? *sniffles* Then again, you did post the chapter and we have another one on the way...*squees happily* Loved the chapter! That was a fun explanation of magical lines and abilities! Long story short, granger is going to have nothing on corvus XD For her sake and sanity, I hope she becomes his friend lol. Hope you feel better soon hun!

Very interesting familiars Corvus has, can't wait for chapter 10 ^_^

Great chapter! I like where this is going :) A Basilisk is the perfect familiar for Corvus! Update soon :)

this is so good i love that you defined his animals anyway i just want corvus happy. but remember one think this is your story write the way you want it i forgot to ask will this be slash