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January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Alright, finally, I have time to read again! And I'm all caught up, too.
I was absolutely right, and you are exactly the person who can do this story justice. You've managed to move me to tears with Harry's condition, and the notion of Albus as pragmatic and willing to allow Harry to suffer for the "greater good" is so much more realistic given his position in the Wizarding world. One can't be all warm and fuzzy when effectively running things at Hogwarts.
Severus is just brilliantly, completely Severus, all sharp edges and hidden warmth, and Lucius is compelling. Like so many others, I loathed him in the books, but here he is fleshed out and given wonderful depth. I love the way the Muggle world puzzles and intrigues him, and the Pepsi addiction? Just perfection!
Honestly, your talent for bringing out the depth in the characters is amazing, and even the smallest of details, like Narcissa worrying that Draco will need to be prepared for how frail Harry is, add so much to the story. It becomes my reality as I'm reading, and that's exactly what I love to have happen when I read.
And the plot twists! Gods, I adore your devious mind, woman! I'll be waiting to see what comes next, eagerly!
I was absolutely right, and you are exactly the person who can do this story justice. You've managed to move me to tears with Harry's condition, and the notion of Albus as pragmatic and willing to allow Harry to suffer for the "greater good" is so much more realistic given his position in the Wizarding world. One can't be all warm and fuzzy when effectively running things at Hogwarts.
Severus is just brilliantly, completely Severus, all sharp edges and hidden warmth, and Lucius is compelling. Like so many others, I loathed him in the books, but here he is fleshed out and given wonderful depth. I love the way the Muggle world puzzles and intrigues him, and the Pepsi addiction? Just perfection!
Honestly, your talent for bringing out the depth in the characters is amazing, and even the smallest of details, like Narcissa worrying that Draco will need to be prepared for how frail Harry is, add so much to the story. It becomes my reality as I'm reading, and that's exactly what I love to have happen when I read.
And the plot twists! Gods, I adore your devious mind, woman! I'll be waiting to see what comes next, eagerly!
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January 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter and I'm looking forward to the custody hearing, especially if Dumbledore turns up. Eagerly awaiting your next chapter.
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January 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this chapter. It was good to see Harry getting out of the hospital and moving closer to getting healed.
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January 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I am glad that they have been able to do this without Dumbles getting involved.
Can't wait for more.
Can't wait for more.
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January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
cant wait for more. been really good so far
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January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i loved this story if there is an update or sequel pleaseeee send me the link to it thank you
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January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I want to keep reading!!! I'm checking back often for updates. Be warned!
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January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter. Really enjoyed reading it! Please update soon!!
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January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It'll be interesting to see where you take this--how long with Harry's recovery take once he's in place with the Malfoys, and what will happen/what will he do once he's on the road to recovery. Will you take this up into his school years, since you're only a year off, and even with magic, I could easily see all the damage Harry's endured taking up to a year to heal...maybe even a few lingering leftover effects that flare up from time to time. How will this experience change the boy?
Yes, interesting indeed, what places this may go.
Yes, interesting indeed, what places this may go.
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January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You know, liking your stories is really horrible:
after reading the breeding darkness I'm always pouting since I know it will take a while for the next chapter to appear. So when instead no obvious truths is updated I'm all -.-". Until I start reading at least. Then I start drooling and berate myself for not treasuring your story enough... Of course then I start longing for the next chapter of no obvious truths and the cycle repeats...
I bet you are a sadist and do this on purpose ^.~ would explain the evil, evil cliffhanger. But gods, I'm getting all jumpy with excitement. But really this story is an emotional rollercoaster for me and I always start crying when Harry tells Mrs Figg not to be sad about him dying. Long comment short: you write really, really good stories, so thank you for sharing your imagination and creativity.
after reading the breeding darkness I'm always pouting since I know it will take a while for the next chapter to appear. So when instead no obvious truths is updated I'm all -.-". Until I start reading at least. Then I start drooling and berate myself for not treasuring your story enough... Of course then I start longing for the next chapter of no obvious truths and the cycle repeats...
I bet you are a sadist and do this on purpose ^.~ would explain the evil, evil cliffhanger. But gods, I'm getting all jumpy with excitement. But really this story is an emotional rollercoaster for me and I always start crying when Harry tells Mrs Figg not to be sad about him dying. Long comment short: you write really, really good stories, so thank you for sharing your imagination and creativity.