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for No Obvious Truths

by Danyealle

person psychosmurf
schedule April 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved protective mama bear
person Minimalomyotismon10
schedule April 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
More please! i am just waiting for dumbledick and his order of the flaming falmingos to try and stick there noses into this and gets whats coming to them! are you going to do any bashing on certain weaselys or Ron & hermoine at all or wil they be friends through and though? i cant wait till you update this!
schedule March 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry, so much to take in. I wonder if they give him childrens history books and such if it will help him learn and understand more about the wizarding world better/faster.
person Tania
schedule March 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait dor yoi to ipdate soon! It's a great story I cant wait to see where you are headed with this! Truely fantastic though I can't lie, I can't wait for the futurw threesome love ;-)
person Jan
schedule March 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lol, poor Lucius. Please update chapter 10 soon ^_^
schedule March 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Will Harry and Draco be going to Hogwarts (not sure if it was mentioned or not)? I would imagine with Harry as sick as he is, he wouldn't be well enough. Plus I like the thought of Draco and harry having tutors while Dumbledore tries to get Harry to Hogwarts.
person GoddessonmyKnees
schedule March 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Poor Harry thinking he walked in on something illicit.

Can't wait for more.
person roosickle
schedule March 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ok you'e got me hooked, I hope you update regularly :) very well characterised Severus and Mrs Figg, enjoyable bantering and well written ,
person Sapphire Phoenix
schedule March 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. There is just one thing that tugs at me a little: medications can cause reactions when you mix them with others. I know this because we lost my mother to a rare form of Leukemia in '99 and you wouldn't believe some of the stuff that they tried. I would imagine that it would be the same with potions: some should not be mixed with others or it would cause different symptoms.

Other than that, I love this premise! I only wish that I could have gotten my mother to Severus and Narcissa myself.
schedule March 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Aw, poor Harry, he just doesn't get an easy time with it. But, I think it will make him stronger and probably more compassionate in the end. Love the idea of the dragon hats. They sound adorable lol. Can't wait to read more.