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for No Obvious Truths

by Danyealle

schedule May 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why, but for some reason at the end I kind of expected Lucius to go "this idea, I like it!" Kind of like a play on what Thor does in the movie. Maybe it is because he is blonde...anyways, great chapter! It's about time Albus started feeling like an ass. I am glad Minerva and the other professors are so agreeable and are even using this as a teaching opportunity.
person Reba
schedule May 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A common misconception, fever is bad. Every immune system needs fever to be able to work at otimum level. High fever meens the immune system works diligently. If you lower the fever you hinder yourself in getting well. There is a very distinct line from very high fever, which is ok to deadly high. Since the temperature danger line is very clear nobody needs to be cooled down before.
Whats important is to be sure to know the temperature dead line for each person of your family. From expert doctors, not via gossip.
person reader
schedule May 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
just read this whole story and really loved it. I hope you update soon.
person Reba
schedule May 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Time for Harry and Draco to be brieved on what kind of reactions to expect at Hogwarts.. It is bound to be overwhelmimg. All kinds of hero worship, the judgemental behavipurs and the agendas especially Dumbledores.
How to react to it. How not to let it bother you. And since they are Slytherins the adults will start to teach Harry the inner workings of group dynamics. The whys, the hows and the manipulation methods one can use.
For Harry it is a crucial survival skill.
person ChaosLady
schedule May 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I would feel sorry for Dumbledore, if his own ignorance hadn't caused Harry so much pain. Excellent update!
person psychosmurf
schedule May 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch15: Glad everyone is coming together to help harry and old fart realizes he screwed up
person GoddessonmyKnees
schedule May 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I loved the flying dragon. I want one.

Can't wait for more.
person ChaosLady
schedule May 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is really sweet.
person psychosmurf
schedule May 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch 14: sweet chapter. Glad he got to talk to his parents a little and the party was nice.
schedule May 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter. The time at the cemetery was handled sensitively and I certainly identified with Narcissa on changing her mind about Smaug. Already looking forward to the next chapter.