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February 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Write more it's really good
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December 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story I look forward to reading more when it comes. :D
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September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
awwwww. they;re so cute. i wonder how the WW is going to handle this sudden baby boom. with voldi still lurking it's a bit inopportune timing wise.
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August 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love "weddings"! And I love these couples! I am in the mood for some fluff and this sort of was fluffy, kind of, in a way.
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August 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A very fluffy chapter!
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July 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
just one word[?]...MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
I know, not a word, but expresses my feelings about this chapter...
like this story...oin to the next chapter...
I know, not a word, but expresses my feelings about this chapter...
like this story...oin to the next chapter...
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July 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
loved this chapter!!! can see my sons...tell them no and that is what they want...remind you of Draco at the end...
now I look at my grandsons and have to laugh at my son...
on to the next chapter...
hehe
now I look at my grandsons and have to laugh at my son...
on to the next chapter...
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July 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I have spent three days reading this story, so obviously I see its merits. Even though you do tend to get bogged down in the lineages and inheritances, it is a good story and one that I plan on following from this point on. I like how the relationships are growing, even the OOC ones. I even like the Weasley bashing. However, I need to comment on the writing. As an educator, I understand that standards are slipping, but a website like this which is all about encouraging authors should have vetted this story before publishing it online. I don't know why you refuse to get a proofreader but it is yourself that is being hurt by that decision. I hope you find a good editor or Beta or whatever to help you make this story as good as it can be.
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July 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Point. It just gets extremely complicated to follow in a text format. I am very appreciative of your attempts regardless, if you feel you need to expound upon it then do so. Its your story. If I want one in a certain way that badly I'll write it myself as is proper among writers, even fanfic writers like us.
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July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was good. I was not comfortable with what Sirius did to Tonks, but I also understand that she was being unreasonable. It's not like the bonding has to last forever, just long enough so the child is legitimate. I did like the conversation between Snape and Lily. I'm also glad that Severus is going to let Remus love him and let himself love Remus.