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for I did not sleep with that wizard!

by KusanoSaku

person Kim Watson
schedule September 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Can't wait to read more,please update again soon.
person milapink
schedule September 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
A very good chapter. Poor Blaise, her mother turned to see that.
I'm curious to see how everyone will act with babies.
person staar
schedule September 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
wow 2 days to read and i loved it !!!!!!can't wait for more !!!!!!!! you really need to make Ron's life HELL !!!!!!
person Samantha
schedule September 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love it, can't wait for more!!!!!!!!
schedule June 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
interesting story :) BTW, you change Amelia Bones name in this chapter, and perhaps the last, to Emelia from Amelia. Good writing but please take the time to proofread your stories for correct words and spelling and spacing between words that creates other correct words so a spell checker doesn't pick them up. A spell checker would pick up incorrectly spelled only, unfortunately, not the words such as bit instead of bite and suck instead of such (I put the last one in because I typed it myself and had to correct it ;) Keep up the writing and maybe you can work towards being published one day
person vitycar
schedule June 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
ola eu sei que n
person vitycar
schedule June 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
ola eu sei que n
person CJ
schedule May 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
that was Awesome
person milapink
schedule May 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I loved the chapter. I would like to read more.
person ChaosLady
schedule May 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Delightful!