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OMG that Dubblefuck is still on the crap again now he is planning on taking Harry or one of his kids , hope that don't happen !!!!!!! Draco will kill anyone who touches Harry so will Black!!!! Thanks for the update !!!!

Lovely update!

I love your story I really do but I can not stand sirius son i get it he wasn't there for you when you were growing up but he was falsely imprisoned and your mother never told him so thats more mommy than daddy.the fact that he's trying to help you now should show you that he's a good guy at least give him a chance stop being such a jackass still though I cannot wait for the next update please do it soon

Wonderful! Please update soon!

I wonder what inheritance harry got. I mean, he was already adorable. Way to make it even harder for Draco to keep his bits to himself. Good grief, the pair of them must be sooooo frustrated. :P

Are you aware that you post the same chapter twice?

The baby gifts sound darling! Wonderful update!

so you had Harry with so many gifts that he got over excited !!! so good Thanks for the update !!

Quite enjoyed the Wiccaning. As for the creature inheritance, I'm not really sure what would suit him best. There are so many good ones out there, whether canon or fandom, that it's really hard to choose. Maybe you'll give him a completely new one, who knows.
Anyway, just wanted to point out a couple of things that you missed while editing:
* When Lucius first starts his part, he says that they "do not seek to bind these heiresses to any one destiny while she is still too young to choose". It should be the male form in both instances.
* When Andromeda anoints the boys' heads with oil, you switched once and wrote Artemis instead.
* When Orion starts to glow, you wrote that the magic sunk into Teddy's skin.

Great update!