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for I did not sleep with that wizard!

by KusanoSaku

schedule February 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering if you're gonna pair Hermoine with a wizard or a witch?
person Anon
schedule October 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Up until chapter 38 it was Amelia, not Emelia.
person D.Grey-Girl
schedule October 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I have a question, why is 45A and 45B identical? It just seems strange. Thank you for dedicating a few chapters to my sis. She wrote Potions Fume.
person Anon
schedule September 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You have too many people you are focusing on, I can't keep track of all of them. The story idea is good, but would be much better and easier to read if you cut your focus down. I don't know if you proof read, there are a lot of mistakes in grammar and using the wrong word that makes it hard to understand. I do think you have talent.
person Nubia
schedule September 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Woaaaaaaaaaa I read this history maybe one year half but not read more in this update began read again all chapters this history very nice I wait for the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule August 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Unneeded: (putting my tag her as between compy crashes and ill health i've long forgotten my password and user name. This will also help keep your anon's separate)

What made you decide to shift spelling from the Canon 'Amelia' half way through? I've also noticed Arwin's name has shifted and Annie's eyes have got from violet to brown. Hard keeping track of the details without re reading the lot, isn't it.
person Anon
schedule August 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Unneeded:
Bugger, with all the kurfuffle with pregnancies, bondings and what not, no ones had the time, nor inclination to track down yon old goat and put him down hard. That's sure to come back to bite them.

*winces. Yeah, i didn't think it would be long before young Cat popped. Quads is no ones idea of a picnic and considering her ages, and the general troublesomeness of magical pregnancies... frankly, i'm amazed she's lasted as long as she has. Was she bonded? (can't remember)

Good going Siri, bringing Blaise into the mix. i'm guessing she needed blood as well as the blood potions?

YES! finally, someones pulling Sirius brat up short. Kids been nothing but a dick from the get go. I mean, yeah the circumstances he was sired in weren't the best but Sirius is doing his best for them, so really he needs to suck it up, get over himself on concentrate on the important things... like his lady and their kids.
person Love Faith Embers
schedule August 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
(ch. 49, really 47) I love the end of the chapter! I can't wait to read more!
person BAFan
schedule July 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 12

" . . . This was so complicated
person Jan
schedule July 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, please update chapter 50 soon.