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Wonderful!

I've only recently discovered your writing, and I seem to be making my way thru your catalogue of work. I am obviously enjoying myself. I want to make this a good review as I am having computer problems of my own and am doing this on kindle. I like to read series because I like to get to know the characters and virtual universe in an indepth way. From your writing I am guessing you feel the same. I like that you have a very detailed universe to refer to and expand on. I don't like when you copy one chapter into another story,though I do understand it. I don't like paragraphs that masquerade as a chapter. I would rather you wait till you have a chapter to update with. That said, you seem to be doing a pretty good job of keeping up with quite a number of stories. You have some issues with grammer, spelling, and syntax but I am much more interested in story, so as long as it doesn't get too intrusive, I can deal with it. I am anxious to see where you go wit this story. THank you for all you hard work.

I tried to review last night but I was so tired I couldn't come up with a good one. The sex scene between Draco and Harry was very wonderfully sweet and so was how Draco took care of Harry afterward. That incubus has sure been busy! I don't think I've ever seen a Lucius/Amelia Bones pairing before... I can't wait to see Severus and Remus together! Please update this one soon! Oh and if you could possibly update your other fics sometime soon, like "A Godfather's duty" and "Thou Shall Not!" I would greatly appreciate it!

yes, yes, *Waves hand. i got the wrong twin name. :P

blinks...whoa, har and draco are GOOD together. har will just have to get used to i. ^^ i'm sure he'll adjust.

0.o still, hooly dooly that was one busy lile thingi. just how much energy does it need, or was it stocking up while the munchies were good? at least the last pair seemed content. susan seemed a bit put out and her now other half is likely to be completely stunned.

so molly's a bit of a brick round the neck to her household huh... still, she's got no cause to complain. she played dirty and got what she wanted, if it didn't turn out the way she thought, that's no ones fault but hers.

oh, oh, oh, i can't wait till meili and luc get together. they'd make the most adorable kids. not that draco's hard to look at but still.

A lot of family stuff to sift through & figure out! A lot of babies to be born at about the same time!

this is a wonderful story! i love the drarry SO MUCH!! esp the smut bits.
but all the talk of the family tree was very confusing to me - there was alot of detail ;)
cant wait for drarry's wedding night in the next chappie!!
keep up the great work! :)

So now Draco is a veela also? Cool, I like those...so sexy. Lucius certainly isn't how I expected him to be..thank goodness! Not crazy - at all - about going outside the bonding with Ginny to get a girl! Ewww and I'm too possessive for that & I would think Draco certainly would be!
I'm ready for some more Draco/Harry bonding also anxious to see how Ron & Granger handle all this...Ginny also. What about Pansy? Did she have expectations about Draco?

wow, super fast up date. anywho, i was going to say, the bonding procedures between pure blood families sound hella complicated but i'm glad har's bonding is acting as a bridge to bring families back together and make a link to others that were former enemies. I'm also glad that draco has the sense to leave har as much freedom as possible because he would indeed have rebelled, hard core. he doesn't take well to being controlled. somehow, i don't think draco is going to need the infidelity advice... though he might agree to have a baby with ginny, but it would be a long hard road to get him to agree. speaking of which, the weasleys can't rage on to much at har, they still owe him and he could make their lives so very difficult if he wanted. i don't think he will, not unless they do something of out and out betray him. har is nothing if not loyal.
i hope luc and draco will be okay. not hard to guess who lucs mate is.
i wonder if/when sev n mooney will get together.

wow, that was one busy little lilith thingie. or was there more than one? If so, the entire student population might need to be checked out cause i'm thinking unknown pregnancies would be dangerous for the barer and devastating for the sire, if they were born before he know of them.

well, that will make nev n luna happy. poor fred, that sounds like it's going to be tricky to sort. the twins formal introduction confused me a bit. does that mean they are NOT molly and arthur's kids?

hey, if umbitch actions were responsible for the accidental abortion of an unknown pregnancy, could she be punished?

welp, now that har and draco are first stage sorted, the others can begin moving on to the next tangled level. so much needs addressing. dumbles, umbitch, the dursleys for starters. revenge needs to fall on their heads like heavens wrath.
then figuring out what happened to the wards that let the lili thingie in, dealing with any other incidental pregnancies resulting, and the resulting bondings and so on. they got a lot of work ahead of them.

wow that was a lot of information... I don't think I quite kept track of all the names and family relationships but I got most of it lol. I like how it turned out that Harry is actually Draco's real bondmate and not just an accidental opportunity because they were attracted to each other. I like it when they were meant to be together. And whoo hoo for being able to have a real wedding night :)

What a wonderfully long and juicy chapter! I would say it made my day but I just got done watching my dog running around like a chicken with it's head cut off at the dog park!Lol!