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I'm really enjoying this. Incubus/sucubus...fun idea. Yea! Glad Arthur is going to have a hard time & Molly is being shown up for who she really is. Arthur is so weak! Hope more Harry/Draco & their twins are coming up. Blaise having twins also? Girls maybe like for H/D's boys? Always liked Blaise.

Update soon!

Whose child is Hermione pregnant with? Outstanding update.

I am so torn about this story and I honestly mean this as constructive criticism rather than a flame. I think the premise is really good but can't help but feel that you have over complicated the story; tweaking too many names, talking too much about 'pureblood' and 'traditional' politics and laws and such. It just all feels this slightly strange mix of overly serious and casual. I personally feel that this chapter was better than the last few have been; wasn't quite so heavy and not as much of an information over load, focused more on the relationships between the people rather than the politics of it all.

Oustanding! It's a nice long, juicy chapter.

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I'm enjoying trying to keep up with the lithean pregnancies & bondings. Glad Gidean came back but he needs to make Arthur crawl a bit. I hope there will be more love & closeness between Draco & Harry. They seem more like business partners right now. Loving George being preggers. Like to hear more about his mate & him & how the are coping. What's Mollie doing. She always seems so pushy & has a attitude of "her way or the highway". What are Ron & Hermione up to & how are they reacting?

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Thank you for updating this! After reading "Thou shalt not!" I was really in the mood to read new chapters of this, and "A Godfather's duty". There were some grammar issues too. I normally don't mention this, but a few sentences were so scrambled I had a hard time understanding them. Like when Sirius is threatening Tonks and Kingsley with the Black cellars if they tell Dumbledore. I think what you meant to have Sirius say is: "If you even think about telling Dumbledore you will be spending time in my cellars in place of Bella and the rat" What you actually have written is something else that makes no sense. There was also a scramble sentence when you cut to Amelia Bones but I forgot what it was. Other than that, it was a great update!

Thanking you for clearing that up for me....and I love the new chapter....I really like that sirius isn't biting his tongue even when it come to the aurors......please update again soon