Chapter 57: Love the idea of this club! I'm sure someone would screw it up if it was ever tried in RL. For the "greater good" of course
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Exceeding Expectations
Still loving it!
Noticed some spelling errors, but not sure of which chapters (sorry). I believe this chapter has a name wrong. Her elopement with Lucius... I believe Lucius should be Ted?
why does Molly have a room beneath the Nursery?
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why not have ginny and michael corner have a one child contract...then he can date hermoine but now the poor boy is stuck with crazy.
As sad as it is, it's true, what Ron and Ginny do with their personal life are their choices, it's sad that they had kids, cause they are the ones that'll pay for it, but it's not up to Harry to do something, it's up to their bonded, please update chapter 57 soon.
I've been reading this story, but between the updates taking so long and the number of characters I'm lost. If you didn't have soooo many different people maybe I could keep track of things. I like the story line, I think your writing has a lot of potential if you could focus it. I think I have to stop reading it now.
So here's the thing, I don't want to be negative because I could never write anything like you do. You have talent and your work is I interesting. I look for updates even though I think this is one that started in 2012 (I think, I'm not sure), but it's frustrating for me to have the story never end. Also I think you have too many characters, I can't keep them straight when I read straight through it, let alone months in between updates.
How are we supposed to keep track of the massive amount of characters?