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by vinsmouse

person AbbyRose
schedule September 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Im super excited to read more.Im guessing that Harry will go to live with his bio grandfather, though how he'll get past Dumbledore, idk; :D Anyway, Im curious about whether or not his grandpa will be happy or bitter. So far you've done super well with your writing and the back story, though i really do dislike Rose and George now. I can't wait for more. :D

Happy writing
schedule September 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hopefully har isn't to travel damaged by the time he gets to Ginger. smart lass that lil's, very smart lass.
schedule September 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Go, Amelia, go! I like that you told the second chapter from her point of view. Great chapter!
schedule September 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Now HERE is a cross I've never come across before. Kudos on an original (or at least extremely rarely used) cross.
schedule September 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That would mean that Harry would have a grandfather that he didn't know about, and potentially, aunts and uncles, sired by his grampa that he would have no clue existed. Intrigueing. Please continue this story.