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for Hidden Family

by vinsmouse

person she-who-waits-in-darkness
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loving the four chapters in one day! And damn that sneaky old goat for escaping again!
person Jan
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 25 please ^_^
schedule September 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Little Harry is quite impressive. Excellent chapters!
schedule September 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i am so loving this story, such a wonderful twist on things and so sweet adn funny and believable. and i love ginger and his friends. great work :D
person Jan
schedule September 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please update chapter 17 soon.
schedule September 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh yes, dumbles has NO grip on this laddy. dumbles is losing his touch i think. Can't he sense that there's no evil aura from har's scar. His views are so black and white too. And narrow... and conspiracy theorist. I do hope they bite him in the arse sooner rather than later. the mans a menace. Can't even pic the difference between justice and revenge. If he keeps this up i can easily see har being withdrawn from hogwarts and transferring school.
And SEV *shakes my head. For a sly slippery snake he's sure being an idiot. unsubtle has a smack over the head.
It'll be interesting to let things play out now that har knows the stone poses no danger.
I'm glad har is in ravenclaw too. Min kitty doesn't seem like a very supportive house head. That anyone could hold their temper in Sev's class is amazing. I think this is only the second Claw Har i've come across and it's very well done.
I'm glad har is keeping up his friendship with Nev. Will he with Susan as well?
He's said nothing about Quirrel... did he just not have enough presence to register with har? I mean the curse scar is clean so he wouldn't have any problems around the man.
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story so very much. Thank you for your faithfulness. I look forward to more installments.
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
beams, this har is no dumble pawn indeed.
dumbles really has no on but himself to blame. this har is trained, proud, confident and has family backing him. Dumbles has no chance. It will be interesting to see how he manages with a har that won't be his tool.
malfoy sr is going to be pissed as well. this changes the entire dynamic. I hope har stays friends with ms bones and nev. I'm also sure Draco will take to logical thinking like a duck to water.
dumbles is going to have to be doing a lot of back tracking and re grouping if he ever hopes to make use of har.
I hope har still becomes friends with the twins though... they're fun. ^^
you write a welll crafted and entertaining story.
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Three more chapters in a row, yay!
person HarveysGirl
schedule September 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is so sweet. I had never heard of Biggles before so I looked it up on google. This is a really unique crossover. It is heartwarming and logical. It's a great read.