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by goldhorse

schedule March 14, 2020 at 12:00 AM

that was beautiful!

schedule September 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I'm always leery about reading any time BDSM or sub/Dom, hard or soft core, because it is difficult to write with respect, sexiness and do it justice. You did all of that and so much more. I really enjoyed this as a one-shot!

schedule October 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I believe that I would love to read a muilt-chapter story of how Snape and Herimone got together.
schedule January 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed what was here but I can't help but wish for more
person chyara
schedule May 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Quite enjoyed this fic.
Would have loved a scene at the end of Ron being cursed because of trying to 'tattle'
person chyara
schedule May 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Quite enjoyed this fic.
Would have loved a scene at the end of Ron being cursed because of trying to 'tattle'
person Sampdoria
schedule December 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. While BDSM aint usually my first pick, this story is so sexy and brilliantly written, I enjoy it in heaps. Adding Ron-bashing and you make my day:-))
person steve
schedule December 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hard on ron, the idea of him asking hermoine to marry him when not dating seem wrong, i would be hurt that she keep her she dating a secret. ron i belive would be a dom, why he does get angry, he forgive fast, and and to keep cool in the war at 17, so gave him a few year,

part of me think ron could when in a fight, he brave, and he would gladly die.

sorry dont like ron bashing, kind of a good story.
person Emily
schedule November 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Severus and Hermione were so hot and sweet together. I can't wait to read more of your stories.
schedule October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM

Absolutely lovely! I thoroughly enjoyed that.

I especially like that you demonstrate the consensual nature of the relationship, as well as the caring aspect with regards to both parties.

Well done! Thank you for sharing, and happy writing!