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by Dazzlious

person Krystal
schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chris is in an awkward position. He seems like a good person and I feel bad for him since he is trying to make Hermione see the truth even if it might mean losing her in the process. I imagine as their relationship progresses he will either give up trying to make her confront the problem with Draco or get so angry with his weird role in their strange relationship that he'll leave her too. And what is the reason every guy seems to lose interest in her anyway? She doesn't seem to be doing anything to Chris to drive him away, at least not yet anyway.

As soon as you mentioned kinky stuff I imagined that would somehow lead the Hermione/Draco situation to come to a head. There are quite a few kinky scenarios I could see those two experiencing which would make them realize how to talk to each other. In fact, the exact kink I thought of was dirty talk. As in the teacher would ask them to switch partners to get a fresh perspective on the non-physical dirty-talk lesson and the truth would come out accidentally. Just a thought. So excited to see what you have planned.
person colao
schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this is really fun!
person Selena Malfoy
schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update! I agree with the previous reviewer; Chris is in an incredibly awkward situation. I kind of wish he'd just leave so Hermione and Draco can get down to business. I feel the farther you go down the path of "Hermione and Chris" the harder it will be to have her end up with Draco. However, this is only my opinion and I can't see the whole picture of the story like you can.
I can't wait to see where you go from here! I'm very excited about some kinky fuckery for Hermione (preferably with Draco). Please update soon!! xoxo SM
person DB1
schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
@4 great chapters!!! Update soon

DB
person anonymous
schedule September 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is amusing, and yeah it helps, how... educational.
you're such a tease - Malfoy! (And Hermione too, extremely)
But I like the building tension too, it'll be worth it
person SarahWhitman
schedule September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't know quite what to think of Draco, yet. It's obvious that he's attracted to Hermione, but I can't decide if there's even a hint of positive emotion among them. I like Chris well enough, but, being a Dramione site, I'm still holding out for D/H. Not that I can figure out how they'd get there from HERE....
At any rate, I'm still here and enjoying the story, for whatever it's worth.
Thanks for posting,
SW
person Ziehlin
schedule September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Argh! That was too short. Thank you for it tho. Off to waiting, again.
person dracosgirl007
schedule September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! That was HOT! I think I'm going to really like this little story your writing! Love the way Draco keeps taunting Hermione. I wonder how she's going to handle it? Anyway, I am soooo looking forward to reading more!!!
schedule September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i just love it !
please let them partner! i would love to read this.. :)
schedule September 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, Draco did admit to wanting her, so that's a small amount of progress from staring angrily. lol He has no idea how to get a woman, the poor man. And, Hermione is so out of her depths. lol I am truly enjoying the general idea of this story. I keep imagining myself in such a class and cringing at the idea of so many people seeing me like that. She is soooo much more brave than I. ha ha ha Thanks, even if you are just stringing us along. lol ;-) HG4eva