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for Sexual Expression

by Dazzlious

person cpetnm
schedule August 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is so fun! I've read it twice.
person Mystery
schedule November 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVED this fic. Like, it was smutty, but not too much. It was somewhat fluffy which was cute. Draco was arrogant but her ions still liked him, the sex wasn't too disgusting to read as I've experienced in other, poorly written fics. So yeah, one of the best fanfictions I have read it aages, loved it! Oh gosh, I'm starting to get repetitive, I'll stop. But I'm going to go check out your other stories now, I hope they're all as epic as this!
person Mystery
schedule November 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was an epic starting point. Makes me wish that I hadnt started this story rn bc I'm on my periods DX

No matter, I can always read it again after ;D
schedule October 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for a lovely story, a wonderful class (even if it can never happen lol), a happy Hermione, and a more well educated and grown up Draco. I still would like to offer my services to make Chris feel better. ;-) Seriously, that was great fun. Thank you! HG4eva
person SarahWhitman
schedule October 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I liked the ending! You made it all come together and I have to admit--as much as I had my doubts in the beginning--I still couldn't quite see how you were going to pull it all together. Well done! :) I also LOVED your word choice in certain parts: "make love", "touch me", "beautiful, "love me", "darling"...the whole bit about the little noises and such....that makes such a difference in stories and really makes the good ones stand out. An excellent fanfiction!
Thanks for sharing!
Cheers,
SW
person Anon
schedule October 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh god you have to update soooon!
person petalsoft
schedule October 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! I love your story. Please continue it soon. Hot and sexy stuff:)
schedule October 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!!! The true non-asshole version of Draco. I don't know how she's going to be able to forgive his manipulations, but I hope she will take a chance on him because she deserves the chance to be happy after all he's done to her. Of course, he still needs to sincerely apologize for his actions, but at least she knows he wasn't purposely trying to just be horribly mean. I hope he treats her more than like a goddess when he finally gets her. :-) Thank you again! HG4eva
person DB1
schedule October 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
@6 at least he came clean!! Update soon

DB
person Krystal
schedule October 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, but saying her boyfriends were a hydra nearly killed me. That was so genius I couldn't help but sympathize with him, despite the horrible stuff he's done. Amazing chapter.