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for Vexations

by lightspeedsound

person Smiaou
schedule September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!! I want to read more!!!!!
i wonder if they both will know who is who!
person momordique
schedule September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic, really! Thanks for working in the consent and staying true to the characters, such a rare thing to have in fanfics! Keep writing, can't wait for the next chapter!!!
person Bob
schedule September 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Please write more! :D I can't wait for a new update! :D
schedule September 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
person guiltypleasure2
schedule September 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That certainly was too close for comfort for two reasons
person Missycam
schedule September 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fuck! It was brilliant! I love it! :-P
And I don't know if it was done on purpose but Lucius called "Tobias" Severus once ;-)
I hope Hermione will catch this on lol

Update soon ;-)
person Slytherin_Goddess
schedule September 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story! Can't wait to see what happens when they get back to Hogwarts :)
person CryingCinderella
schedule September 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
For some reason it won't let me be logged in. Odd. At any rate, a deliciously sinful update. I'm not generally a fan of Lucius added into the mix- gets cliche for me- but you mastered it so tastefully that I could hardly object in this instance. I almost want the poor simpleton to stay so that Severus is somehow forced to save her. The notion that already his possession of her is driving him to madness is brilliant. Your writing is clever and you have honed this craft well. Just- please, dahhling- FASTER! It's too deviously delicious to not have updates sooner! All the best!

~CC
person Nami
schedule September 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love love love, please continue, this is amazing~
person ella jane
schedule September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy Hades that was hot. I've greatly enjoyed this so far and am really excited for more. Congratulations on your excellent smut and keep on writing